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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 14
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Tina smiled sweetly.
Alex: Tina?
Tina: Yeah?
Alex: I’m gonna be sick.
Tina pointed Alex in the direction of the men’s room.
He got up and ran.
Bette went around the desk and found a heavy set woman dressed in blue scrubs.
Bette: Excuse me. My friend Alice Pieszecki was brought in here a little while ago, can you help me find her?
Nurse: Sorry, I’m busy, You’ll have to wait at the desk.
Bette turned to find the desk still empty.
Bette: Please I just need to know what room she’s in.
Nurse: I told you, lady! Not my job. I’m busy.
Bette had enough.
Bette: Busy? Doing what exactly? Changing bed pans. Ma’am, I don’t want to waste your time and I’m sure you wouldn’t want to waste mine. I am asking you nicely to please tell me what is going on with my friend! Now!
The nurse gave Bette a look of shock and headed over to the patient resgistry.
Nurse: What did you say the name was?
Bette: Alice Pieszecki.
Nurse: She’s in room 212 and that’s all the information I can give you.
Bette: Thank you.
Bette rolled her eyes as she turned around and walked back to her friends. Alex wasn’t there but Tina paced the floor.
Tina: What did you find out?
Bette: Just what room she’s in. Where’s Alex?
Tina: I don’t know. Throwing up I think. Did they tell you anything about her condition?
Bette: No but I’m going to go to the room. Do you want to come?
Tina: Of course.
Bette reached for Tina’s hand and walked quickly down the hall.
They reached the room and Tina stopped to take a deep breath.
Tina: I just hope she’ll be ok.
Bette: Don’t worry about that now.
Tina nodded as Bette pushed the door open.
Alice was lying on the bed, her eyes closed. Bette was shocked to find that Alice looked fine. No
tubes or breathing machines.
Tina walked to her friends bedside.
Tina: Al?
Alice strained to open her eyes.
Tina: It’s me Al.
Alice: TK?
Tina: Yeah, Alex called and I came as soon as I could.
Alice: Huh?
Tina: Do you know where you are?
Alice: Yeah, some hospital.
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ugh…well Tina may take whatever she can get, but I am going to need a little more than that! Come on quit draggin this out and get them back together! LOL
Damn! I was hoping i was the first commenter… I was just aoubt to get offline to DJ and saw u left a chappie@@ Keep up the great work!!
damm that just reminded me of my drunken time in the hospital.
i know now why i cant stop read your story..is like a Sado&Maso relationship..LMAO..you like to torture me and i love been punish..lol..that chapter break my fragile TiBette heart so sad in the end..i know it will be a very and hard time to rebuild trust but they will get trought and Bette want this so much but she have a lot of fear to end hurt again..and about Alice and Alex they deserve each other..lol..amazing chapter as always any lucky another one later??? :o)
this has never been a predictable story, which is a part of what makes it so great. i love alex and alice together. funniest pair on the planet. i don’t know how hard i laughed at the high-five thing. such funny drunks. plz keep the story’s comin!
WOW. Excellent as always, totally see where Bette is coming from. It hurts like hell to trust again Tina, or anyone. Damn. I hope that everything turns out, if not together then at least apart and happy. Excellent update. Cant wait for more. This was a funny chapter, Alex and Alice just crack me up.
I wish I could tell you I’m feeling better every day
that it didn’t hurt me when you walked away
but to tell you the truth I can’t find my way
and deep inside me I feel like I’m dying
I have to see you it’s all that I’m asking.
Vida, give me back my fantasies
the courage that I need to live
the air that I breathe
carino mio, my world becomes so empty
my day’s are so cold and lonely
and each night I taste
the purest of pain..
Friendship is the base of any relationship. So them working on being friends is the start they need in order to get back together. Hopefully Bette will let her heart take control and trust Tina fully again. Great chapter as usual. Can’t wait for more
Damn it! Why is Alex such a drama queen? Without the interuption there would have been the chance of some B&T TLC….wouldn´t it, hu Flair?? Anyway, am still hoping for the happy ending….what a sucker I am…!
great chapter, at least there is still some hope that they could get back together… right?
Ah the agonizing push and pull of ‘I still love you but I don’t trust you’ – it makes for some great drama, as do peanuts ;-) Lovely to see an update.
friendship aaa…well we will c how long that holds up..great chapter..flair continue soon!!
k tina is a pussy for not saying anything of substance. she could at least tell bette that she understands. that she wants more but know thats she will have to earn her trust. if people have these kinds of feelings after 2 freaking years obviously there is more to it than friendship. since there is, it is a freaking waste of life to not take the risk again. i hate waste of any kind. i enjoyed this, am gald you updated this over the weekend. it will be a long and bumpy road. thanks again.
Trying to be friends with someone you’re in love with….oh how that sucks :-/
nice chapter! really like the pace at which it is going!!
The hardest thing that Tina will need to do is walk away. from Bette. the rest is all downhill,Bette want be able to keep her hands off Tina for long. Thanks
Ah, my Flair lady, how could you ever disappoint the cohorts of your admirers ? You perfectly succeed imagining something else but the usual clichés about awekenings (in all the senses of the word) in these sort of awkward moments. Anyway, so-rightly-awarded drama queen, you’re an inexhaustible source of ideas and C, for you, will never rhyme with Cliché but with Creativity.
For me, I will ALWAYS have confidence in this particular talent of yours – and I really think you already know it. Don’t you ? (… me, flirtatious ? Common !)
By the way, I appreciated a lot the winked way you put the usual cliché line in Tina’s mouth, before Bette quickly correct it ! This “I know. This means nothing” was both a sweet and funny allusion to the S2 show’s conclusion to the so famous B&T brief encounter, I must say.
And I really love the way you show our dear two sharing the same obvious relieving feeling after their unexpected night spending close to each other. Just a bit of emotional comfort before the next Flair’s dramatic wave coming from the infamous drunked pair, this time ! Grrrr… just when things were wonderfully light and full-of-hope between the no-more-so-lost-lovers… Well, of course one could also say that the supposed tragic interruption was a welcomed way to avoid a possible increasing awkwardness. But well, not me now – because I cannot help but feeling like a deeply frustrated romantic girl ! (I know, that’s childish and so far of the ideal Flair’s fan attitude ! Sorry ! *wink*)
God, I knew that when you’re soooo gentle with us, that’s just pretty frightening ! (lol)
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Now here’s an other thought of mine about your work…
Yesterday, you created a masterpiece of artful erotism only with few emotional gestures and glances. Thanks to that and the way you depicted in this new chapter what Tina called the start of a friendship (we’re not dupe, of course : friendship will never be a serious option between these two magnets !), I was reading all Bette and Tina’s scenes very carefully, paying a particular attention to any detail. This way, simple gestures like Tina rubbing Bette’s arm or Bette reaching Tina’s hand on the road to Alice’s hospital room suddenly became incredibly charged with electricity – and consequently very powerful and intense. (Like the way Bette – consciently or not ? – uses “T” again…)
So, of course, I let you imagine the way you made me feel with this kiss on the cheek at the end ! (… where’s my cup of water, now ?)
My goodness ! This way, the day you will give us a “real” kiss scene, I’ll be quite dead !
What a subtle girl you are…
“Tina was a little hurt that Bette felt the need to emphasis only friends”. Oh my, Tina ! Don’t you know that such emphasis is so often an obvious way to hid a very opposite feeling ? Oh yes, I forgot : love is blind and we’re all silly being in love ! (lol) Thanks god, our clever “partners in crime” weren’t dupe about the “little friendship thing” ! I simply adored how they teased them, that was a pure delight (ah, that “code” gag was a must !)… Go this way, go ! Anyway, to “enhance” this so-called friendship (my eye !), you can depend on my favorite drama master. Nothing best but drama stuff to increase emotions – and so, feelings. Drama is such an emotional revealer…
And, anyway, Bette already confessed the truth behind the friends word. Certainly because she’s currently ill ! A cured Bette will perhaps be less vulnerable, so I will not bring her an other chicken soup, to keep her ill much longer ! (lol)
Finally…
“- Some things don’t change I guess. / – Some things do.” That was really sweet. Just the sort of exchanges that express a lot of things, far away behind the words themsleves… In waiting of the day we’ll see coming the most precious four-letters word again, at least we begin to see an other very precious one at the horizon : hope…
Now let me dream and sigh about that a while, before your next update, lovely merciless author !
And since all the commenters are spoiled enough to receive kisses each time, here’s a big affectuous one for you in return, charmer. … How do you say that ? Mwah !! (lol)
P.S.: … Do you plan to end your fresco with Alice and Alex’s marriage ? (hee hee !) They are soooo marvelously connected, no ? What a chemistry ! (I know, I know, Alex, you have a reputation, don’t be mad !)
Friendship my ass! I’m with btownjuli on this one; I need more than that; its just that simple….make it so!
Otherwise…post soon…LOL
I like Alice and Alex they are to funny. Bette and Tina talking is a step in the right direction, your slowly getting us their Flair and I can’t wait. Please write another
My heart aches every second Bette and Tina stay “friends”, are they going to have meaningful side relationships? Or are you going to let Tina and Lauras relationship get serious to make Bette jealous? Whatever happens please put me out of my misery. LOL
Great job darling!!! You gives me hope… Just do me a favor… don´t make me wait so much for another post ok?! Bye…
;)
flair that it LOL! WHOA! OK then.
perfect! No Bette outrage and no Tina sobbing….I think you avoided the cliches….I for one LOVE the tension here too….as long as they are talking and TRYING to resist each other…wonderful work.
So much of me is made of what I learned from you,
You’ll be with me, like a handprint on my heart,
And now whatever way our stories end, I know you have re-written mine,
By being my friend…
A lull before another storm…I know how hour mind works, and I love it!
Thanks for giving us a respite from the HIGH DRAMA!!!!! And thank god that Alice wasn’t seriously ill!
lovely chapter Flair. just friends- doesnt work for me. needs some B&T loving
Hey flair, I’m a little behind today but I’m catching up right now! You’re killing me with this! Why can’t Tina just promise always take care of her and never break her heart again? Because that would be too easy, that’s why! *Sigh* I do enjoy the drama though, so bring it on flair. Wherever you’re going, I’m going your way. ;)
Not the cliches lines, which I loved about your work. Hmm… you get better and better every chapter, things that I didn’t expect to read… indeed worthy being crowned as the drama queen! Bravo.
Damn this sad and they just being friends that’s all, hope they will more then that. Alice and Alex is so fucking funny and they are make us laugh. Ok post soon please, thanks!
just friends right!!!!!!!!!!