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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 26
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Tina stepped back giving the once strong brunette the air she needed.
Tina: Is there anything I can do?
Bette thought for moment.
Bette: Could you grab my coat in the other room?
Tina: Where are you going?
Bette: I think I have been fairly calm through all of this and as my reward I need a cigarette.
Tina: Is that really wise Bette? I mean Sara’s in the other room dying of cancer
Tina didn’t even get the chance to finish her sentence, before Bette stormed past her.
Tina: Bette, wait!
Bette bee lined toward her room, grabbing her jacket and the pack of cigarettes hidden in the front pocket. As she made her way back to the front door, Tina stepped into her path.
Bette: Tina, please move.
Tina: No Bette. Storming off won’t make this go away.
Bette: Maybe not, but right now I truly don’t need to be lectured and that’s exactly what you were about to do.
Tina opened her mouth to speak but was cut off.
Bette: Don’t Tina. Let me deal my way and you can deal yours. I don’t want to fight with you so please just move.
Tina had never seen Bette like this. It was like she had shut down and Tina was starring into a pair of hollow brown eyes.
Tina’s voice softened.
Tina: Ok.
Bette didn’t look back. She breezed past the blonde and right out the front door.
It wasn’t her intention to speak to Tina that way, but after the stress she had been under the last thing she needed was Tina standing on some soap box.
Bette reached into her pocket and removed the pack of cigarettes. She placed the cool paper between her lips and prepared to inhale as she sparked the lighter.
Bette: What the ***** am I doing?
Bette tossed the unlit cigarette into the street and watched as the cool breeze sent it rolling down the steep hill.
Bette slowly sat down on the curb attempting to steady herself.
Bette: ***** you Melvin!
Bette dropped her head into her hands and let one single streak down her face and burn her skin.
Alice stood in the bay window looking out toward the brunette.
Alice: Hey Alex, come look at this.
Alex made his way next to Alice and followed her gaze to the street.
Alex: What the
Alice: Looks like Bette has hit her breaking point.
Alex: I should go talk to her.
Alice: I think we should just let her take some time. This little break down might be just what she needs right now. Besides if you go out there she will put up some kind of a front so she doesn’t look vulnerable. You know that.
Alex: But she shouldn’t be alone.
Alice: Give her ten minutes. If she isn’t back by then, I give you permission to go and be her knight in glittering armor.
Alex gave Alice a sideways glance.
Alex: Was that a crack at my sexuality?
Alice paused for a moment.
Alice: Yes, I do believe it was.
Alex: It was good.
Alice: Really? I thought maybe it was a little too obvious
Alex: No it was just bitter and angry enough, the perfect mix of ***** attributes.
Alice: Touch my friend. Touch.
Alex slipped his arm around the blonde’s waist.
Alice: It’s so strange to see Bette like this.
Alex: I know. For a while there I thought she was void of all emotion.
Alice: Maybe our little girl is growing up.
The two stood in the window and watched silently as the strongest person they knew quickly fell to pieces.
TBC…
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good to c u back flair…lets c what bette does
Hey Flair where have you been LOL! Thanks for posted again I’m been waiting for this that was great Thanks!!
hey! thanks for posting again! What a treat! Bette’s going to have to call for reinforcements quick…great update!
albeez…you are my hero!!!
Something bad? Happening in Oz?Under the surfaceBehind the scenesSomething baaaaaaad…Sorry. “Bad”
glad you gave us another chapter and hope more fallows. thanks a bunch, u never disapoint. post soon.
Racey,I love you too. I hate that everything is so uncertain when we are apart and I hate that we both doubt so much. But please know that I never doubt what i feel for you or what i want for the rest of my life. which is you. I love you rachel and madonna herself could not make me stop. haha, the pop star of course not the virgin. Who the hell would listen to the virgin mary? You need but ask and you know that it would be done, gotten or taken care of. Because if you are well than nothing can be ill. Can i peel you like a banana now? heh, ya i can in t-minus one and one half hours!Forever and Since Always,BridgetP.S. we should be verizon mascots.”Did I lose you? Are you still there?”If someone were to right a Broadway musical about us (wink wink) that would have to be the title song.
Damn this is bad and drama coming. Bette need to open up to Tina and let Tina help her, hope they will have a talk soon. Love Alice and Alex, they so funny. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Nice to see a chapter Flair.More drama yes.Nah just kidding.Put some love dovy stuff in once and awhile.
You did it again Flair! Another excellent chapter. And don’t worry take the time that you need, you know we’ll all be waiting =)
Wow! Can we stack any more on poor Bette? Thankfully she has a great support crew, but will she actually use it is the big question and let Tina and the crew be there for her instead of trying to be Super Bette? Good to see you again Flair!
good update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! melvin and jail wtf!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awsome chapter. only certain dramatic things can move her and get her vulnerable especially with those who has had a hard life. well… it surely doesn’t apply to everyone cos we all do deal differently (or run in some cases).
you are wonderful and my morning is complete! thank you and post when you can
Hey girl I’m so happy your back and happy for you. Thanks for the wonderful chapter it seems that Bette needs to hit bottom again. This poor girl Thanks
Wow, one good drama after another. Nice chapter, glad you’re back. Always looking for your story.
jwet and fergz – two of my favorite ladies. see fergz im up and your safe. be back flair, i have to go to work.
yay! you are back in full form flair. another great chapter. i look forward to your posts. I am glad Bette has her friends with her, especially Tina. keep the drama coming.
Bette need to open up to Tina and let her help..she is not the enemy..abd Bette is right Fuck oyu Melvin…and do i have to say i love Alice and Alex???..lol..so funny..cant wait for more Flair..thanks:o)
Great story. Hope you can post again soon.
flair your stories never sease to amaze me. You truley have a talent. Keep the chapters coming, loving this story
i wish you post more often but because you deliver such grat chapters, you’re forgiven LOL…i’m glad bette is falling to pieces because she needs to admit that she’s not that strong and needs tina and her other friends to help her…thanks
I’m afraid it’s gonna be very heavy issue with Melvin.. brr! great chapter as always, thanks!
waiting for more..!!!!!
Another brilliant chapter
Hey Flair,Great to hear that life is treating you right.As for the inspiration, it was very enjoyable to see that there are chinks in Bette bravado. All of these horrendous events have finally shown a vunerable side.Now Tina, get your ass in gear and go get your woman and support her through this terrible time.Happy to see you back where you belong.Your Loyal Fan.