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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 50
Alice: Look over there?
Alex tried to find what Alice was starring so intently at.
Alex: I don’t know what we are looking at.
Alice: Right there? The red head.
Alex: I don’t see…
Alice smacked his upside the head.
Alex: What the hell?
Alice: Focus Al! Focus!
Alex: On what?
Alice: Do I have to spell everything out for you.
Alex: Obviously.
Alice: Ok, do you see the table where our waiters girlfriend is sitting?
Alex: Yeah.
Alice: Do you see the red head at that table?
Alex: No.
Alice: Jesus Christ! Come on! She’s right there!
Alex: Oh, we’re looking at a girl?
Alice: Yes Alex. Believe or not, cute gay men aren’t the only people living on this planet.
Alex: I can dream can’t I?
Alice: Look again.
Alex squinted.
Alex: Oh my!
Alice: Thank you!
Alice sighed gratefully that Alex finally caught on.
Alex: I had no idea the chicken pot pie wasn’t actually a pot pie! I would have never ordered it.
Alice: I swear to god Alex, you do not want to fuck with me tonight.
Alex: Ok ok.
He held up his hands to show is he was done messing around.
Alex: Now, who am I looking at?
Alice: The woman with the red hair sitting over there.
Alex tilted his head.
Alex: Isn’t that…
Alice: That is exactly who that is! And if she is here then Bette can’t be far behind.
Alex: They aren’t dating Al. I talked to her a few weeks ago. She is dating the guy who has his arm around her chair.
Alice: Bullshit.
Alex: Bullshit?
Alice: Yup. And I’m gonna prove it!
Alice got up from her chair just before Alex grabbed her arm.
Alex: And this is gonna help Tina how?
Alice: I don’t yet. But it will.
Melinda: Now remember that I have been in MANY productions with Bette so I have seen all of this with my own eyes.
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YOu don’t know how excited I am to see you on here!!! Don’t have time to read it right now but I will first thing in the morning. Can’t wait for this story to continue..
I was just thinking about you. Welcome back. I too will go back to read tomorrow.
i glad you are back, pps
I have to say you had my blood pumping and not really in a good relaxed way….more tense, nervous and wondering what you were going to give us…glad to see you’re back…I think I’m ready!!!
It is about damn time! I keep coming back to this story because it is a reminder of how absoutely proud I am to have the prvilege of being in your life. It the one place that sums up everything I lvoe about you: Your incredibl talent (event in both the writing and the fact that you are so detailed about the show/audition/ rehearsal process – how do you thnk she knows all of this girls?!), your incredible heart (only someone who knows true depth of emotion could write the cliff hangers you do!!), and how much you love me in return (why else would you watch me tool around cleaning all day while I made you write?). I’m sorry I’ve subjected al of your readers to my sappy romantic ideology, but I couldn’t think of a more appropriate medium to use to tell you I am in love with you.
Well I’ll be damned! Welcome back Flair!! Bring on the DRAMA!!!! I loved the last few lines Bette: You told them. Avery: No you just did. LMAOOOO!!!! Great read. Thanks, and again, it’s great to have you back writing again.
Ok I finally got to read this. All I have to say is that one of the biggest drama queens is back.Helena is going to be trouble. Bette has to see Tina again. Avery is getting it from both ends.This is worse than the show itself right now.PPS.
You mentioned this in the car, so I thought I should catch up. I just read the most recent chapter and am going to to start over from the very beginning. Wow, that was long long ago!
flair I am so excited you are back to the story. I have been checking in and low and behold a post. please keep up the great writing.
before i start read i want to say “WELCOME BACK” i really missed your story.. now im off to read.. will comment later..
Great as always…..keep those posts coming. I know you will have our girls together again…..of course, there will be tons of drama to go along with it. Welcome back!
drama drama drama… well i hope Bette do as boring Avery said.. cant wait for Bette and Tina encounter.. Flair.. just perfect as always.. and i hope you do post soon.. i cant wait for months again..lol.. thanks :-)
please write again.. please continue this story.. it is such a nice story.. the twists that you create are really awesome.. please, please, please… post again soon..
lovelovelove it, so glad you’re back :)
welcome back, im always reading this story over and over again…another great update! i sooo love this story and alex heehee! please please please post soon!
I havent read this yet but I just want to say… WHOAAA!!! You finally posted. I’ve waited and waited and waited and I must admit that I gave up and u left me heartbroken. I read all ur chapters within a few days (ya, I was new) and u took me on a roller coaster ride and when u stopped, u left a very disturbed me. I was just telling someone abt how I cudnt sleep for a while after reading ur stories a few days ago and complained that u left me hanging. I dont know if u r going to bring tibette back together, the way u did at first, BUT, I sure hope so (PLEASE!!!) Ok, I’m ranting, but gosh, how cud u just up and leave us like that? Ok ok, I’m just grateful that u r back. Pls dont abandon us again.
OMG..WOW I LOVE YOUR STORY……..i laugh i cry and get angry. i can’t wait until your next post.
Drama keep coming, please post more, thanks!
tbc?