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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 50

    Story written on February 16, 2008 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68667
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    ” I never asked for this, or planned it in advance. I was merely blown here by the winds of chance…”

     

    Derek: You ok?

     

    Avery’s eyes shot open the second Derek’s cold hand made contact with her shoulder.

     

    Avery: I’m fine. Why?

     

    Derek leaned back in his chair.

     

    Derek: It looked like you were shaking.

     

    Avery blushed.

     

    Avery: Oh..umm…

     

    Derek: I just wanted to make sure you were ok.

     

    Avery: Yeah, I’m fine.

     

    The silence between them was awkward and it was obvious both parties had a lot they wanted to say.

     

    Derek: A few of us are going out after rehearsal to Hurley’s for a drink. Do you want to come?

     

    Avery hesitated.

     

    Derek: Unless you’ve got plans with that new man of yours.

     

    The tone of Derek’s voice stung but Avery knew he had every right.

     

    Avery: I umm…I don’t know.

     

    Derek: Ok. Well if you decide to join us that would be great.

     

    They shared a sad sincere smile before Derek turned back around. She didn’t want to come off as if she was too good to hang with the chorus but the truth was that she had no idea if she and Bette did have plans that night. She hadn’t spoken to Bette since she dropped her off this morning and that seemed like forever ago.

    Rehearsal finally ended and Bette was officially a “no show”. Avery wasn’t sure if she should be concerned or angry.

     

     

     

    Bette looked around hoping Peggy was kidding when she said she was leaving she and Helena alone to talk.

     

    Helena: She isn’t coming back so we might as well get on with it. Don’t you think?

     

    Bette: I’d rather not.

     

    Helena: I’m sure not, too bad for you that you have no choice.

     

    Bette watched Helena take a sip of her drink as if it were blood straight from her victim’s neck.

     

    Bette: Helena, I just have to know. How does it feel to have your mother higher me as your babysitter?

    Helena laughed. A response Bette was not expecting.

     

    Helena: My mother may think that’s what she has hired but I assure you, I need no babysitter. Had I really put up a fight my mother would have forgotten all about you.

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    1. YOu don’t know how excited I am to see you on here!!! Don’t have time to read it right now but I will first thing in the morning. Can’t wait for this story to continue..

    4. I have to say you had my blood pumping and not really in a good relaxed way….more tense, nervous and wondering what you were going to give us…glad to see you’re back…I think I’m ready!!!

    5. It is about damn time! I keep coming back to this story because it is a reminder of how absoutely proud I am to have the prvilege of being in your life. It the one place that sums up everything I lvoe about you: Your incredibl talent (event in both the writing and the fact that you are so detailed about the show/audition/ rehearsal process – how do you thnk she knows all of this girls?!), your incredible heart (only someone who knows true depth of emotion could write the cliff hangers you do!!), and how much you love me in return (why else would you watch me tool around cleaning all day while I made you write?). I’m sorry I’ve subjected al of your readers to my sappy romantic ideology, but I couldn’t think of a more appropriate medium to use to tell you I am in love with you.

    6. Well I’ll be damned! Welcome back Flair!! Bring on the DRAMA!!!! I loved the last few lines Bette: You told them. Avery: No you just did. LMAOOOO!!!! Great read. Thanks, and again, it’s great to have you back writing again.

    7. Ok I finally got to read this. All I have to say is that one of the biggest drama queens is back.Helena is going to be trouble. Bette has to see Tina again. Avery is getting it from both ends.This is worse than the show itself right now.PPS.

    8. You mentioned this in the car, so I thought I should catch up. I just read the most recent chapter and am going to to start over from the very beginning. Wow, that was long long ago!

    11. Great as always…..keep those posts coming. I know you will have our girls together again…..of course, there will be tons of drama to go along with it. Welcome back!

    12. drama drama drama… well i hope Bette do as boring Avery said.. cant wait for Bette and Tina encounter.. Flair.. just perfect as always.. and i hope you do post soon.. i cant wait for months again..lol.. thanks :-)

    13. please write again.. please continue this story.. it is such a nice story.. the twists that you create are really awesome.. please, please, please… post again soon..

    16. I havent read this yet but I just want to say… WHOAAA!!! You finally posted. I’ve waited and waited and waited and I must admit that I gave up and u left me heartbroken. I read all ur chapters within a few days (ya, I was new) and u took me on a roller coaster ride and when u stopped, u left a very disturbed me. I was just telling someone abt how I cudnt sleep for a while after reading ur stories a few days ago and complained that u left me hanging. I dont know if u r going to bring tibette back together, the way u did at first, BUT, I sure hope so (PLEASE!!!) Ok, I’m ranting, but gosh, how cud u just up and leave us like that? Ok ok, I’m just grateful that u r back. Pls dont abandon us again.

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