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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 50
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Avery watched them go as she dialed Bette’s number. The phone didn’t even ring, it went straight to voicemail. Did she shut it off? Avery waited for the tone to leave Bette a message.
Avery: It’s me. I hope you’re ok. I haven’t heard from you all day and now your phone is off. Anyway, I’m gonna go grab a drink with people from the cast. Chorus folk. We’ll be at Hurleys if you want to join us. Call me ok?
Avery had hoped she didn’t sound too desperate in the voicemail. She was sure that was the last thing that Bette needed, a desperate child begging for attention.
It was obvious once they had arrived that Hurleys was “the place” to go. Melinda and Scott were familiar with the whole staff, which made it quite easy for the group to secure a table in the back. The waiter who was serving them seemed quite pleased to see Melinda again.
Ryan: Hey lady!
Melinda: What’s up Ryan? Everyone, this is Ryan and he is the best waiter in the history of waiters.
The group smiled and exchanged “hello’s” and “nice to meet ya’s”
Ryan: So what will it be?
Melinda opened her mouth to order but was cut off.
Ryan: I already know what you want. A Blue Moon with a wedge of orange.
Melinda nodded.
Melinda: Smart boy!
Ryan: Well I do try. And for the rest of you…
They went around the table, each ordering their poison of choice. After having her first sip of wine Avery began to relax and enjoy the company.
Scott: Are you sleeping with him?
Melinda: Oh stop it.
Scott: Oh my god you are!
Lindsay: Tell us, is he a good waiter in bed too.
Melinda: Let’s get this straight. I am not sleeping with him…currently. I have slept with him. Please notice my use of the past tense.
Derek: Does he know that it’s “past tense”?
Melinda: If he knew do you think we’d be getting such great service?
Avery couldn’t help but laugh. These people were great and she was actually having a really nice time. She leaned to whisper in Derek’s ear.
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YOu don’t know how excited I am to see you on here!!! Don’t have time to read it right now but I will first thing in the morning. Can’t wait for this story to continue..
I was just thinking about you. Welcome back. I too will go back to read tomorrow.
i glad you are back, pps
I have to say you had my blood pumping and not really in a good relaxed way….more tense, nervous and wondering what you were going to give us…glad to see you’re back…I think I’m ready!!!
It is about damn time! I keep coming back to this story because it is a reminder of how absoutely proud I am to have the prvilege of being in your life. It the one place that sums up everything I lvoe about you: Your incredibl talent (event in both the writing and the fact that you are so detailed about the show/audition/ rehearsal process – how do you thnk she knows all of this girls?!), your incredible heart (only someone who knows true depth of emotion could write the cliff hangers you do!!), and how much you love me in return (why else would you watch me tool around cleaning all day while I made you write?). I’m sorry I’ve subjected al of your readers to my sappy romantic ideology, but I couldn’t think of a more appropriate medium to use to tell you I am in love with you.
Well I’ll be damned! Welcome back Flair!! Bring on the DRAMA!!!! I loved the last few lines Bette: You told them. Avery: No you just did. LMAOOOO!!!! Great read. Thanks, and again, it’s great to have you back writing again.
Ok I finally got to read this. All I have to say is that one of the biggest drama queens is back.Helena is going to be trouble. Bette has to see Tina again. Avery is getting it from both ends.This is worse than the show itself right now.PPS.
You mentioned this in the car, so I thought I should catch up. I just read the most recent chapter and am going to to start over from the very beginning. Wow, that was long long ago!
flair I am so excited you are back to the story. I have been checking in and low and behold a post. please keep up the great writing.
before i start read i want to say “WELCOME BACK” i really missed your story.. now im off to read.. will comment later..
Great as always…..keep those posts coming. I know you will have our girls together again…..of course, there will be tons of drama to go along with it. Welcome back!
drama drama drama… well i hope Bette do as boring Avery said.. cant wait for Bette and Tina encounter.. Flair.. just perfect as always.. and i hope you do post soon.. i cant wait for months again..lol.. thanks :-)
please write again.. please continue this story.. it is such a nice story.. the twists that you create are really awesome.. please, please, please… post again soon..
lovelovelove it, so glad you’re back :)
welcome back, im always reading this story over and over again…another great update! i sooo love this story and alex heehee! please please please post soon!
I havent read this yet but I just want to say… WHOAAA!!! You finally posted. I’ve waited and waited and waited and I must admit that I gave up and u left me heartbroken. I read all ur chapters within a few days (ya, I was new) and u took me on a roller coaster ride and when u stopped, u left a very disturbed me. I was just telling someone abt how I cudnt sleep for a while after reading ur stories a few days ago and complained that u left me hanging. I dont know if u r going to bring tibette back together, the way u did at first, BUT, I sure hope so (PLEASE!!!) Ok, I’m ranting, but gosh, how cud u just up and leave us like that? Ok ok, I’m just grateful that u r back. Pls dont abandon us again.
OMG..WOW I LOVE YOUR STORY……..i laugh i cry and get angry. i can’t wait until your next post.
Drama keep coming, please post more, thanks!
tbc?