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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished ( Sequel to Can’t Help Falling In Love) Chapter 3

    Story written on July 29, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “there are bridges you’ve crossed you didn’t know you crossed until you’ve crossed…”

    Bette’s heart
    stopped, or maybe for the first time in almost 2 years, it started again. Bette
    wasn’t sure. Hearing Tina’s voice caused goose bumps up and down her body. Her
    brain was screaming at Bette to delete the message but instead she hit
    “replay”.

    “Hi, Bette. It’s
    Tina. I, umm, well; I’m doing like you asked. I didn’t think it would be this
    hard. Anyway, umm call me back, please. I’m sure by now you know that I moved
    into the city, so here’s my new number…212 555- 8452. Ok, bye. Oh one more
    thing…Happy birthday…”

    Bette: Pull over.

    Cab driver:
    Excuse me.

    Bette: Pull over,
    I’ll get out here.

    Cab driver: But
    we are still at least 15 blocks away…

    Bette: Just stop.

    The driver pulled
    over to the side of the road and stuck out his hand ready for payment. She
    handed him a $20 and jumped out.

    It was freezing
    and the snow was indeed falling. She couldn’t go home to Sara, not yet.

    She was torn and
    painfully confused. Maybe she should have listened to Jackie. Bette scolded
    herself for not just signing the paper and being rid of Tina all together. She
    reached again for her phone and winced when her frozen fingers began dialing.

    Alex: Miss me
    already?

    Bette: She
    called.

    Alex: What?

    Bette: Tina, she
    called.

    Alex: Did you
    talk to her?

    Bette: No I
    missed the call and she left a message.

    Alex: What did it
    say?

    Bette: Happy
    birthday…

    Alex: That’s it.

    Bette: That’s all
    I remember.

    Alex: *****, where
    are you? Do you want me to come get you?

    Bette: No, I’ll
    be ok.

    Alex: You’re
    lying.

    Bette: Maybe…

    Alex:
    Definitely. I’m on my way…where
    are you?

    Bette: No
    seriously, I’ll be fine. I have to get home anyway.

    Alex: If you need
    me, just call. Try and enjoy the rest of the night.

    Bette: I’ll do my
    best.

    She hung up the
    phone unsure why she had even called Alex. It’s not like he had some magical
    powers that could change the past. She took another look at the time and
    realized Sara would be undoubtedly pissed. When she finally made it home it was
    almost an hour later. She entered the apartment ready to lie about some awful
    accident in midtown getting her stuck in traffic. The excuse would go unused.
    Sara was in the bedroom asleep.

    Bette stood at
    the doorway and starred at her sleeping girlfriend. She looked so peaceful,
    unaware of the turmoil churning in Bette’s soul. Quietly she crept into the
    bathroom. She locked the door and turned around to face herself in the mirror.
    Bette watched as her face contorted from confused to angry to completely
    wrecked. She found herself sitting on the cold tile of her bathroom floor
    clutching to her phone. Nervously she dialed the number that had now been
    etched into her brain.

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    4. I love this one, anxious to see how you will work this out…all the regret, anger and the new partners to get Bette and Tina back together…because that HAS to happen, right? Oh, now I’m in a panic…..you will get them together, yes? LOL….can’t wait to read the next chapter.

    5. damm looks like Bette’s surprise party will be a surpirse party after all, cause you know who alex is bring. I really really like this story, I guess I like when B and T have back bones and aren’t all mushy.

    6. Among the many things I love about this story, that you ended the first in blazing hot Arizona summer and started the second in freezing winterish New York is brilliant. The locale reflects the emotional state of their relationship. Brilliant!

      Keep going…

    8. YOU AMAZE ME!! I just finished the first 3 chapters and I have to tell you: You have the best ideas!!! Everything was great (well of course Tina and Bette could be together again) I am excited to see where this story goes!! Thanks For Writing!!

    11. Absolutely great. I hope with time…maybe they get back together??? Oh well. Love this story almost more than the previous one ;) keep it up and post real soon, liketwo seconds ago… 5 stars for you:)

    13. man I feel like crying, you gotta get them back to each other, although I can tell it’ll be one long hell of a road, for Bette especially. Are you gonna be nice and post another chapter today???? and are you gonna be even nicer and NOT leave us hangin all weekend????????? TOTALLY LOVIN IT….TOTALLY!!!!

    16. “I always have a reason for doing things… always.”
      Oh yes, I NEVER doubt about that !! Knowing you are the all-mighty deus ex machina who already knows how events will go, it’s a fact that just brings a great anticipated thrill each time a new update bright on the stories’ list !

      You’re amazing, I mean it : through the first part of your novel (but yes !), we reached pinacle of romantism and passion. Then, the finale was an incredibly powerful symbol of your style, mixing the most intense loving emotions with an awful heartbreaking cliffhanger !
      And now, at the beginning of this SO promising new part of the saga, you brang our poor readers’ hearts to the lowest position ever.
      God, that’s just the ideal way to make us beg you and sigh about the current worries and – above all – this GIANT question mark in mind !!!
      I confess it : I’m quite dead seeing our beloved two in such a painful position… BUT I’m also delightfully tortured, waiting for all the next chapters you’ll cook for us !

      Few words more…
      I love the way Bette is honest with herself and the feelings she so carefully masked for Tina at the phone, recognize them enough to know how unfair it would be to go in bed with her current girlfriend now.
      Of course it will bring a pretty uneasy talk with Sara at the morning, but that was a great thing to do.

      For me, it’s obvious that Bette don’t wish something more than meeting Tina again, but the reason she refused (for the moment, at least) was only because she must guess how harder it would be to mask her feelings eyes in eyes. At phone, of course, everybody is soooo brave and strong.
      In “reality”, it’s such an other test…

      Wonderful sequel, my Flair lady. I LOVE your story so much…
      That’s truly the one that touches my heart on the deepest way here…

      *** THANK YOU SO MUCH ***

    18. be angry… let it out… make up… make out… make love. ah.. it’ll eventually turn that way after we pass all the drama. hey.. am still on for the ride and lovin it!

    22. is Tina crazy???? she talk to Bette like never heppened she broke her heart and now she wants to see her?..Bette loved her so much and still love..i hope Tina be able to make it up with her and now its her time to do it on her knees i´m sad:o(

    24. GOD!!!!!! Suprises, surprises. I love when B and T have this rough edge to them. It makes it real, but my heart aches. Before I was sad they werent together but after reading the break up and this, I have tears in my eyes just like when Ross and Rachel broke up. Damn. When you have this much passion wether it good or bad between two ppl the outcome can be…amazing!!! I hoe we see that. Tell it like it is in the real world honey, dont dress it up. Excellenty job.

    25. The characters seem to have matured a lot since their split. Although I think I can u/stand where Tina was coming from when she broke it off with Bette, it really hurts to see Bette. I feel it for Bette. She worked so hard at trying to accept herself for Tina…to be happy with who she was at her core. To finally feel accepted unconditioanlly and then have that security pull away is almost crippling (trust me i know personally). Bette was vulnerable before Tina. She trusted her and Tina really let her down. The love is still there. At least we know Tina still wants to have some sort of connection. The problem is, how is she going to make Bette see past her fears and realise that she too wants the same?

    27. Good to see Bette taking a little control this time around. Tina lead her by the nose last time, now Bette is the strong one. Nice change. But of course, when they get eye to eye, who knows?!? Only you!

    28. i dont have enough time to say all i wanna say, but girl this just keeps getting better, Bette is still so in love with Tina, and yup i guess Alex will bring Tina with him to the surprise party..

    29. wow bette was harsh but tina was harsh. im liking this but… i know what you can and have done to us. so i wait like everyone else for the next installment. great job

    30. You have go to post soon. I’m sitting here crying like a baby..hopefully..part of it is PMS but most of it is your wonderful writing. Can you post more tonight, morning, afternoon..

    34. well, tina in everything we and every decison we make there’s always a price we have to pay!!!! you deserve what’s being thrown at you. now, go and work hard to get your woman!!! goodluck

    35. I’m so exasperated. I’m angry they didn’t get together in the last series. I’m aggravated Tina is being so thoughtless and immature. And…I’m irate over the fact that Bette’s birthday has been ruined by Tina with her selfish call. Your writing is awesome… you certainly have my emotions on high alert.

    36. Tina hurt Bette so badly. That she doesnt want to see her. Its so easy to say things to people over the phone, If you are eye the person can see how you feel. Bette was smart not to see Tina right now. Plus love that Bette didn’t get in bed with Sara, with Tina on her mind.Loved the first,falling in love with this THANKS

    41. Ok Flair…I’m all caught up, phew. Hmmmm…you’re so good at this – I’m loving it.

      I’m absolutely in love with Bette, therefore I’m baised…so make Tina pay…hahaha. Thanks again women! :)

    44. Wow so it was a ploy to get back into Bette’s life. What a rough road these two have before them. Bette still has it bad and it looks like Tina does too Yeah

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