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    No Turning Back ~chapter 14~

    Story written on March 28, 2006 by theotherlife.
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    ‘We all have reasons to go back’

    Jerry asked me to marry him, Laura said with a happy sigh. Marry him!? What the.. I thought you guys broke up!, Carmen said in shock. Yeah, yeah, Laura nodded with a wave of her hand, but he said he misses me so much and he wants me to come back to L.A. and then he wants to propose…

    So he hasnt asked you to marry him yet? Carmen interrupted. No.. but hes gonna to. Come on Carmen be happy for me! Laura begged, holding Carmen by her shoulders. I am happy for you.. its just that.. well I dont know.. he just always treats you like shit!, Carmen blurted out. He changed, Laura said. Carmen rolled her eyes. Really! He told me hes gonna change, Laura said. Carmen was silent for awhile, she knew too well that it were only false promises but she also knew there was no point in telling Laura shes making a big mistake now. God, Laura really is optimistic.

    Do you love him? Carmen asked seriously. Laura nodded. Yes, I want to marry him. So will you come with me? Laura asked. What do you mean? Carmen asked confused. Tonight, after the funeral, we can borrow Mateos old car and we can drive back to Los Angeles, Laura explained. Back to..? Do you really want to go back immediately?

    Hell yeah! I cant wait to see him! Laura said.

    And mama is okay with it?

    God you should see her, shes so excited. I think shes more excited than I am, Laura said giggling.

    Thats impossible, Carmen said dryly.

    Laura grinned. But Carmen.. please? Ill never ask you to do something for me again. Please come back with me and well have a crazy road trip. I dont want to drive alone, Laura begged.

    She didnt agree with this wedding. At all. And going back to L.A. would have been the worse idea if it didnt mean that she could be reunited with Shane sooner than expected. Shane.. shell be so surprised, Carmen thought happily. It was a fantastic idea.

    Yeah, Ill come with you. Lets pack our bags! Carmen said.

    Julian poked his head from around the corner. Did I just hear something about a road trip? he asked, wiggling his eyebrows. Carmen and Laura laughed. Oh you can come too, of course, Laura said, petting his hair lovingly. Thank god!, Julian said as he kneeled down in front of her dramatically, Finally.. Ill be reunited with my beloved X-box!

     

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    1. yey for really long updates like this one. haha it was a great chapter. I really liked it and I am glad to hear that Carmen is going home early to see Shane. I wonder how much drama is going to come into play if any soon. either way i love the story and cant wait for the next update.

    2. I really love this story it always makes my day when theres a update and it helps me not to think about how bad the show end this season so thank you and update soon plz *love sharmen 4 ever*

    3. I don’t know if I’ve left fedback for this fic before, but great fic! :D I’ve reading it since you started posting it. And you finally updated, coolness! :D It’s especially nice after TLW season finale. Onto the feedback: I’m curious about how Julian found out about Carmen and Lucia. o.0 Hmmm.I hope Carmen doesn’t get in trouble with Shane if Shane finds out about Carmen’s little date, or if Shane were to see the picture… And yay! Soon Carmen will be back with Shane! WOOT! Hope you update again soon. :)

    5. Love your story. Julian wanting to leave early to play his X-box, too funny. My breath stopped when Shane said she was kissing some girl, glad she was kidding. Carmen should never have taken thase pictures w/ that guy, trouble ahead. Post soon.

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