Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Nothing’s Changed, Chapter One
“Hey Al nice of you to join me” Dana said sniggering
“Don’t start Fairbanks” Alice was trying to be mad at the goofy brunette but she couldn’t and Dana saw straight through her. “While you were insulting poor innocent customers” Alice smirked and looked down at the ground “I chose these three shirts. There are two sleeveless singlet type of things and one normal polo. What do you think?” Alice grabbed the sleeveless shirts. “Definitely one of these.” Dana put the polo back on the rack. “Ok but which one?” Alice held both shirts up and looked at them. “Hmmm Dana I don’t know it’s a close call… go try them on, we have plenty of time.” Dana thought for a moment then grabbed Alice’s hand and dragged her to the changing rooms.
“Dana how long does it take to take off a shirt then put one back on honestly… no wonder Lara dumped you” Dana opened the door and glared at Alice “Not funny Al.” Alice knew that she shouldn’t have said anything. “I am sorry” Dana nodded at the writer “Sooo Al, what do you think? Is this ok?” Dana spun around. Alice looked her up and down, taking in everything. Wow look at her arms someone’s been working out! Alice drifted her eyes to Dana ass; she did try on those shorts then. “My god you have a nice ass” Alice muttered under her breath. “Alice what did you say?” Alice shot her head up “ohh nothing, its just that ummm they have nice clean glass in this store” Dana looked around “haha yeh they do to, so about the tennis outfit?” Alice looked Dana straight in the eye, “its good, well I mean… Its… perfect.” Dana smiled at Alice and put on a southern accent “why thank ya miss now stop it before you make me blush.” Alice laughed and shook her head. “Hey Al thanks for coming with me today and you know putting up with me, I will get changed out of this then we can go do something that you want to do ok.”
Dana disappeared into the changing room and Alice got up and lent against the stall door “Fuck”. Unfortunately for Alice she failed to realize that Dana hadn’t locked the door and Alice tumbled backwards. BANG! Alice leapt forward “Oh my god my head!” Alice couldn’t spot Dana. “Dane where are you I am so sorry are you alright!? Dana pushed the door away from her face Alice had jammed Dana between the wall of the stall and the door. “I am ok, ahhhh my nose is bleeding I think its broken.” Alice moved into the stall to check on her friend who was wearing only her underwear “Dane It was an… ohh umm accident I ahh fell back and umm do you need a tissue?” Alice pulled some tissues from her bag and held her hand out “Dana they aren’t used just grab them.” Dana took the tissues suspiciously and put them up her nose to stop the bleeding. Alice couldn’t help but giggle at the sight before her. “Oh Al shut up” Dana was obviously in pain but laughed through it I mean if this was going to happen to anyone it would be her. “Dane put your clothes on and I will drive you to a doctor, I feel so bad…” Dana could see that Alice was feeling really guilty and decided not to be mean to her. “That sounds like a good idea, but umm well I think I need help… I cant really look down, I shouldn’t I mean just incase it starts bleeding again” Alice knew what Dana wanted her to do but Dana was rambling. “Do you want me to help you put your clothes back on?” Dana blushed she was so embarrassed “Yeh haha that’s what I meant.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(37 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
ha this is way adorable more plz
“Dana how long does it take to take off a shirt then put one back on honestly… no wonder Lara dumped you” – Lmao, that was pretty funny, great start!
not usually into danish but i loved thia! can’t wait for your next installment, don’t keep me waiting haha
hay awsm start u portray them really good can t wait to c wat alice and dana will do next lol plz update soon!
I loved this Danish, it was awesome and well written, and alice calling the sporty people freaks was totally alice! :D update soon!
this is great! of course alice would break dana’s nose in such a manner. i like the way you are building their chemistry. please post soon.
fab start, these two make me laugh so much; typical Alice, typical Dana, that was great though! please continue, i would love to read more about their ‘freakish’ escapades lol :)
Lol well i loved it! first fan fic ey, well I hope you continue, this was a great start and you portrayaed both characters perfectly. Hope you post soon!!
That was hilarious! I love that where ever these two go, you always know trouble is close behind! This was a great start. Keep it up.
Hey, great start indeed, you write them pretty well. Awww isn’t Danish in the making the most adorable thing?
Great start, I hope you continue! I agree with sterre, the beginning of Danish is always great, and you can never get enough Danish stories out there.
Wow first fanfic. Looks like its goin to be a good one. Loved the comedy and the chemistry between them. Post soon. Thanks.
Lol this is aweeeesssomee I can’t wait to read more! Please update soon