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Nothing’s Changed, Chapter One
Alice picked up Dana’s jeans of the ground of course she had to be wearing the tight ones today, this is going to be difficult. “Ok now move your left foot up and forward a bit, no step into it.” Alice grabbed Dana’s leg “Guess I will have to do it the old fashioned way.” Dana giggled. Alice finally got both her legs into the jeans and started to pull them up, inch by inch. Dana put her hands on Alice’s shoulders to steady herself. Alice got the pants all the way up now she had to do them up. A zipper and one button that should be too hard. Alice got her fingers on the zipper and bit her lip. She slowly moved it up… “Al that tickles!” Alice felt like she was going to die right there “of course its does now if you don’t stand still it will do more than tickle trust me.” Dana really liked the sound of that but she would never let Alice know it was too dangerous. So Dana started to move her hands up and down Alice’s shoulders while Alice was doing up her button. Alice stood up and stared at Dana. “Oh right you need a shirt! Der!” Alice slapped her hand on her forehead and bent down and picked up Dana’s shirt from the ground. “Dane arms up” Dana lifted her arms up and Alice carefully slipped the shirt over her head she made sure that she didn’t touch Dana’s now swollen nose. “All done. Is that better?” Alice still had her hands on the bottom of Dana’s shirt “Much better” Dana gave Alice that sweet and appreciative smile and stared into Alice’s magnificent deep brown eyes. Dana then leaned in and placed an adorable kiss on Alice’s cheek bumping her nose in the process “Shit… I mean Thanks” Alice had to make a move out of the stall now before she dropped dead “So Dane how about we get you to that doctor already, I think your starting to give Pinocchio a run for his money.” Dana agreed and started making her way out of the store, remembering to buy the perfect tennis outfit on the way.
A lot of customers had heard the commotion and were staring at them at the check out. “Wow I wonder what happened to her!” one customer said to another. “I saw her come in with the blonde one, they must have had a fight or something I saw her hit her in the arm earlier, that poor woman its looks like it would have hurt. Who does that though I mean, what a… freak!”
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(37 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
ha this is way adorable more plz
“Dana how long does it take to take off a shirt then put one back on honestly… no wonder Lara dumped you” – Lmao, that was pretty funny, great start!
not usually into danish but i loved thia! can’t wait for your next installment, don’t keep me waiting haha
hay awsm start u portray them really good can t wait to c wat alice and dana will do next lol plz update soon!
I loved this Danish, it was awesome and well written, and alice calling the sporty people freaks was totally alice! :D update soon!
this is great! of course alice would break dana’s nose in such a manner. i like the way you are building their chemistry. please post soon.
fab start, these two make me laugh so much; typical Alice, typical Dana, that was great though! please continue, i would love to read more about their ‘freakish’ escapades lol :)
Lol well i loved it! first fan fic ey, well I hope you continue, this was a great start and you portrayaed both characters perfectly. Hope you post soon!!
That was hilarious! I love that where ever these two go, you always know trouble is close behind! This was a great start. Keep it up.
Hey, great start indeed, you write them pretty well. Awww isn’t Danish in the making the most adorable thing?
Great start, I hope you continue! I agree with sterre, the beginning of Danish is always great, and you can never get enough Danish stories out there.
Wow first fanfic. Looks like its goin to be a good one. Loved the comedy and the chemistry between them. Post soon. Thanks.
Lol this is aweeeesssomee I can’t wait to read more! Please update soon