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Numb: Chapter 4
More than that it was a feeling that she couldn’t shake, no matter how much she tried. She was not as close to Dana as the others, her life had revolved around the CAC. She loved all of her friends, but she had not spent as much time as she had liked with them. Ironically now that Tina wants them to take a break away from Alice and Shane’s life, is the very moment that clarity came to her.
These thoughts are what were keeping her awake. This and the desperate need to check on Shane and Alice were preventing her from getting any sleep. Restlessness getting the best of her, Bette finally decided that she wasn’t going to get any rest until she checked on the girls. “Well T, I guess this is just another one of the things you’ll just have to forgive me for.” Lightly she kissed her partner, sure not to wake her, and rolled out of bed.
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“What the *****?” Shane looked at the red pool as it hardened on to her carpet. She hated wax, and now it was going to be a pain getting the stain off of the carpet. Scooting the couch back she covered the hardening mass for now, not wanting Lara to see it. “Jeez Al now I’m going to have to have the carpets steamed.”
She looked over at her best friend, who was unaware of the fact that there was even a floor. The only concern
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great chapter..loving this story bc it’s soo different from others. Poor poor Lara…always getting killed…oh well…as long as nothing happens to the danish. can’t wait to see what unfolds next
Please let Shane be alright..Bette is on her way there..PLEASE POST REAL SOON.THANKS
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!
i absolutely love this fic! i can’t get enough. it’s true that lauras always getting killed off lol. so bette’s headed over and so is dana…hmm…killers in the house, shane is…i have no clue, and alice is just a catonic mess eh? hmm wonder what happens next!
GREAT enought said. Other then can’t wait for the next chapter.
glad yor back!!!!!!!!!!! dam did you have to kill lara
I kno I have said this alreddi but I relli am jus SO damn glad ur bak!..yaaay cuz This strie relli is jus so0o0o GoooD..such talent you have:)..I aint complaining but WHY THE FUK are you killing everybody?..damn ‘ilovekc’ this is a cruel&sad strie(which is grt.It’s diff.unique.BEAUTIFULY written)however where the hell is the happy ending!?!..It’s 1 thing 2 knock off the chef..fanz will get over it..yet you cant kill Shane!..If you do that your killing a helpless Alice..&this famili is in need of eacutha..need 2b reconnected..sad striez should have happie endingz!..So0o ya I HOPE(&I am expecting!)Shane lives&Bette&Dane+sum cops cum 2 the rescue or sumthing cuz this once ‘happie famili’ is in NEED of a reunion..ne wai do what u g2 do..I LUV ur stuff&THNK U SO MUCH 4 writing, dun stop PLEASE forever urz a loyal fan..mst PoST SO0N!!!..
And the suspense just builds, Lara kept getting killed off in the fics lol. Love this fic, refreshingly different.
Ahhhh! You’re killing me here! Heh, you fooled us with the wax…but you still killed Lara! Now what will happen to poor Shane? I can’t wait to find out!
what the hell happened at the house and what will dana find when she gets there please post soon I love this
I think I know who is gonna save Shane but I’m gonna wait until the next chapter ;P that I hope you post very, very soon.
This story just gets better and better. Nice twist with the candle wax. I hope that Alice has “woken” up and prevented Shane from getting shot. Please post soon.