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Numb: Chapter 5
*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*
Bette stood outside the door beating on it louder and louder. Where the ***** was Shane? The young woman had to be home, because she could make out
“Damn it Shaneopen this door.” Bette was beginning to get nervous, she and Tina had been gone for a couple weeks and no one had been around to support Shane with
Annoyed with banging on the door, Bette decided to let herself in. She did have a key and felt silly for not using it earlier. Opening the door she looked down and gave
“Shane?” Bette raised her eyebrow. She must have company. To say the least she was surprised that Shane would have anyone over, but had to smile. It was nice to see her younger friend actually enjoying herself. Debating rather or not to turn and leave, she looked down at
Sighing at the woman’s lack of response, Bette turned
“What exactly do you know?” A gruff voice came from the hallway, and Bette turned to see who it was.
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(32 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
So who dies next? *rubs hands in glee* Totally enjoying this fic, love how unpredictable it is keeps me coming back for more lol. Great update!
oh man…this is getting good.i suspected that the killer was the agent watching the house *points finger* i knew it! …man this anticipation is building fast :P btw, im loving this fic, great update!
OMG!!! The is f-ing brilliant! A fabulous thriller. I just read from the beginning! WOW! Please post again soon – You so rock!!!!
WOW… as if people havent already said that… dang, your story is as good as a movie! Its intensely well written… It is nice that all the friends have so much empathy for and are looking out for each other… keep the thrills coming.
Gripping! Suspensful! Thrilling! Keep it coming… :)
you can’t kill bette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMF..R U gunna kill everybody?!:(..plz dun!..I am enamored wit this btw:)..POST SOON..
This is a really good story.
you’re doing this on purpose aren’t you? All I did was beg you in a not so subtle way to keep writting nonstop for the rest of your life with no concideration for your personal life….was that so much to ask?
I hope that they are all o.k i love this story please post soon
this story rocks!!!, I’m loving the building to the main event, its like walking in the dark trying to find your way back lolthere are so many peeps you could kill, and so many ways you could take this story. really glad to have you back writing for us again