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Story written on April 22, 2012 by kins40.
15.
"Make love to me."
The potent yet softly spoken words tear through the stillness of our bedroom.
Night fell a long time ago bringing with it its engulfing darkness, but, call it a sign of the times we live in, total darkness never really envelops us entirely.
I can see her outline as she sits up in the bed from where she was lying next to me. Her lithe frame, so recognisable, so inimitable that, I am convinced of it, were I blind I could still pick her out of a crowd.
"Please… Bette?"
I was so taken aback by the vision of her rising so gracefully that I forgot to answer.
"Of course," I reply to her, rising in turn to bring myself close to her. I still for a moment to kiss her lips lightly, unable to hold back the smile which has formed on my lips.
It has been a while, longer that I would have liked to, but I needed to give her time. I respected her boundaries and her apprehension, I needed to wait until she was ready, comfortable again with her body.
I love her so much and I know Tina loves me, so I reach over, past her, to turn the light on. I want to see all of her, how beautiful she truly is when she comes unravelled in my arms, how good she feels when I touch her, I just want to see her, loving, passionate, vulnerable and achingly sexy.
A soft hand grips my arm as it reaches over.
"No… don’t turn the light on." Her quiet voice whispers.
By the time I turn around to face her again, her head has dropped in an obvious sign of discomfort. It is like she is almost ashamed of her request.
"Baby?" I interrogate softly.
"Bette… I..uh…I’m not the same… my body has changed… please understand." There never was nor will there ever be any reason for Tina to beg me and the simple fact that she feels like it is now necessary breaks my heart a little.
I cup her face with both of my trembling hands, caressing her cheeks briefly with the pads of my thumbs. I lean over, preparing to kiss her. I want to end her plea, I want her to know it’s alright and that I understand.
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Kins, your writing never ceases to amaze me! Loved that 45 was a mini epilogue to Savannah. As usual, I am looking forward to your next installment. Thanks Kins!
Your stories just keep getting better and better! Thanks so much for revisiting Africa..so amazing!
Yay! A return to the savanna. Glad you turned that middle one into a dream, cuz I was about to abandon ship, but geez – Bette needs to eat milder food before bed. What a dream.
I don’t think I can live without my Sunday tradition. Relaxing day, reading great stories. Thank you for the beautiful stories and for considering/using my number. 15 was my brothers birthdate. We were gay siblings, and he was an awesome brother and human being. Thank you K😘
Thank you for your gift to us. Such talent.
So happy you posted…this was so great…hope to read more updates for Savannah…but any story that you create is pretty fantastic…
Thanks Kins for another fabulous update ;-) though 23 almost got me there.. Phew glad it’s only bad dream in the ff world :-D lol.. Looks like raining and cold propelled your nc17 writing mood.. But knowing you feel miserable because of that, may I suggest you to come to the tropic here and enjoy warm weather all along? some said its not warm but hot, but it’s sunny for sure ;-) and maybe it will highlight your mood into sunny mood also :-) hehe.. So glad to have a glimpse of savannah and such a wonderful news to celebrate :-) I simply enjoy reading your story, so sure I’ll re-read them again ;-) thanks again Kins!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Amazing as always. Loved the tiny glimpse of the Savannah life.
Brilliant as always
Okay, first – very sweet. Second – grrrr! You made me cry (I was hoping it was a bad dream but still…), Third – yippee, a reprise to our beloved Savannah (happy dance). Another trio of finely written stories Kins! You ROCK – and no worries about the infinity thing ;). Here’s wishing you bright, warm and sunny days soon! iHH xx
Amazing as usual. Cant wait for the next installment
Thank you, excellent stories esp. with the second one keeping us on the edge of our seat. REALLY enjoyed the trip back to Savannah. You could continue that amazing story anytime…
That was just simply beautiful. Thank you for these wonderful stories. I am so amazed with your creative mind. Thank you again.
Ohhhh I looovvveeddd 45!!! U know Savannah is my favorite story. Don’t know if it’s too late to submit a number but I had an idea since I haven’t seen anything like it before, how about something involving Bette and Tina dealing with a rebellious teenaged daughter (namely Angie lol) the number could be 49
Awww!
Love your beautiful mind Kins. Happy you brought Savanna back. Thanks!
Great story – loved the part with the Savannah story in it.
The first story, kind of hot ..but at the same time…gentle and sweet. Second…I almost …well what can i say?…I can’t see any one of them dying..but at the end she woke up?….I said “thanked god it’s just a dream” ….and your last…glad to see what they are now…and Ellie having an Admirer. While they are waiting for their first born. thanks Kins40.
So wish you’d pick up a pen and give us some more Savannah.