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Numbers
Story written on April 22, 2012 by kins40.
There.
Up close and close up.
What I know, has made her so aware of her own self and doubting that she is in actual fact, resplendent.
The scar.
All 15cm of it.
Just above her bikini line.
A line I will cherish forever. A metaphor of the fine line, Tina walked when she gave birth to the little girl now fast asleep in the room adjacent to ours. The line which had to be crossed in order to give both mother and baby a chance. The line which kept both of them alive.
I love this line.
Inching my way down further, to express my admiration and humble thanks, I feel her body tightened minutely in response.
I stop as I feel Tina shifting uncomfortably. Her legs drop from where they were cradling me and her hands fall down trying to cover herself.
I crawl back up and realised she has turned her head in a decided move to avoid eye contact. Resting on one elbow I gently tilt her head back towards me and looking into her uncertain eyes I simply tell her.
"You are beautiful, don’t ever doubt it …even for an instant."
I dip my head looking for her perfectly sculpted lips, "I love you," I whisper before capturing her mouth. I feel Tina smiling in the kiss as she pulls me close to her, kissing me back with the fervour I know she possesses.
We part and I resume my exploration. Tina’s body trembles once again but I know now it is not out of fear.
I find her scar once again, slightly curved, the redness and swelling of the early days having subsided considerably to leave a pinkish tracing. I press a kiss at one end and another one on the other end.
Tina tenses up perceptibly and I reach up to find her hand. I squeeze it reassuringly and feel the tension subside.
"Just trust me.." I whisper. The warmth of my breath makes the sensitive skin react in a flurry of goosebumps.
My name tumbles out of her lips as I trace the whole length of the scar with my lips, peppering the traumatised skin with soothing softness.
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Kins, your writing never ceases to amaze me! Loved that 45 was a mini epilogue to Savannah. As usual, I am looking forward to your next installment. Thanks Kins!
Your stories just keep getting better and better! Thanks so much for revisiting Africa..so amazing!
Yay! A return to the savanna. Glad you turned that middle one into a dream, cuz I was about to abandon ship, but geez – Bette needs to eat milder food before bed. What a dream.
I don’t think I can live without my Sunday tradition. Relaxing day, reading great stories. Thank you for the beautiful stories and for considering/using my number. 15 was my brothers birthdate. We were gay siblings, and he was an awesome brother and human being. Thank you K😘
Thank you for your gift to us. Such talent.
So happy you posted…this was so great…hope to read more updates for Savannah…but any story that you create is pretty fantastic…
Thanks Kins for another fabulous update ;-) though 23 almost got me there.. Phew glad it’s only bad dream in the ff world :-D lol.. Looks like raining and cold propelled your nc17 writing mood.. But knowing you feel miserable because of that, may I suggest you to come to the tropic here and enjoy warm weather all along? some said its not warm but hot, but it’s sunny for sure ;-) and maybe it will highlight your mood into sunny mood also :-) hehe.. So glad to have a glimpse of savannah and such a wonderful news to celebrate :-) I simply enjoy reading your story, so sure I’ll re-read them again ;-) thanks again Kins!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Amazing as always. Loved the tiny glimpse of the Savannah life.
Brilliant as always
Okay, first – very sweet. Second – grrrr! You made me cry (I was hoping it was a bad dream but still…), Third – yippee, a reprise to our beloved Savannah (happy dance). Another trio of finely written stories Kins! You ROCK – and no worries about the infinity thing ;). Here’s wishing you bright, warm and sunny days soon! iHH xx
Amazing as usual. Cant wait for the next installment
Thank you, excellent stories esp. with the second one keeping us on the edge of our seat. REALLY enjoyed the trip back to Savannah. You could continue that amazing story anytime…
That was just simply beautiful. Thank you for these wonderful stories. I am so amazed with your creative mind. Thank you again.
Ohhhh I looovvveeddd 45!!! U know Savannah is my favorite story. Don’t know if it’s too late to submit a number but I had an idea since I haven’t seen anything like it before, how about something involving Bette and Tina dealing with a rebellious teenaged daughter (namely Angie lol) the number could be 49
Awww!
Love your beautiful mind Kins. Happy you brought Savanna back. Thanks!
Great story – loved the part with the Savannah story in it.
The first story, kind of hot ..but at the same time…gentle and sweet. Second…I almost …well what can i say?…I can’t see any one of them dying..but at the end she woke up?….I said “thanked god it’s just a dream” ….and your last…glad to see what they are now…and Ellie having an Admirer. While they are waiting for their first born. thanks Kins40.
So wish you’d pick up a pen and give us some more Savannah.