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Story written on April 29, 2012 by kins40.
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I need all the rest I can get because from next week, I’m opening my eyes!
29.
Bette pulled the last box out of her car and brought it into the house. As soon as she would pass the threshold, Tina would have officially moved in.
Technically speaking, Tina had moved in a longtime ago. It actually became clear the moment both women realised that the blonde kept more clothes in Bette’s closet than in her own apartment.
So when Bette made the proposition to her over dinner with a little satin box containing a key attached to a silver monograph keyring of the letter ‘T’, Tina accepted with explosive enthusiasm.
Hooking her leg around the front door, as she passed it, to swing it shut, Bette set the brown box down and announced triumphantly.
"Last one!"
Tina gave her a bright smile. She was sitting on the floor looking at the content of another box.
"Come here, look what I found." Tina said waving her hand to entice Bette over.
It did not take much persuasion and the brunette settled herself close to her girlfriend. She was welcomed first of all with a resounding kiss from Tina before the blonde spoke again.
"Thank you for asking me to move in with you." There was another kiss softer this time and two hands placed themselves on either side of the brunette’s head, "I love you so very much Bette."
Bette grinned back, a smile she had been sporting for the past few days and which did not, so far, threaten to disappear.
"I love you too, sweetie, welcome home." Their lips met once again before Bette interrupted the kiss, curious as to the content of the box.
"So what’s in the box?" the brunette asked running a quick inquisitive eye over the opening.
"This," Tina said, splaying her hand and rotating it over the opened box as if she were conjuring a magic spell over a cauldron, "Is my childhood."
She started pulling a few objects from the cardboard container. There were a lot of pictures, an old scarf, a few concert ticket stubs, an old movie poster, playing cards and school drawings, even a papier-mache ashtray in psychadelic colours, and a running medal but there at the bottom of the box was a little seashell.
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I enjoy your writing, Kins. I’ve been meaning to comment and tell for some time, but I haven’t been able to get on the site to read for awhile. Keep up the good work!
😍 I just love your stories K. Thank you for this awesome series 😘
Your stories and writing are so unique. Thank you.
Such wonderful stories…love your writing!
Short but sweet! Thank you.
My number’s turn! And I love what you did with it!
Thanks for the posting! I loved both numbers, especially the last one. Kismet!
Flip me your imagination knows no boundsKins! Should I be awed or scared that you can convincingly give voice to a 25 week old in womb? That was absolutely precious :) And so was that predestined encounter you had them both experience as kids – chills!!! Your stories no matter their length are always filled with wonderful gems and an absolute pleasure to read. Cheers – iHH xx
Amazing…love your writing.
25… So sweet! I love pre-birth Angie’s perspective on her moms! Especially the “It’s grown ups time, I’m going to rest!” As for 29… Well, is that fate, or what? Love the idea that B and T could have crossed paths when they were kids. As in “You know what? you and I belong together, but we’re far too young to do anything about it, so see you in 29 years, babe!” LOL! Great chappy K, and OMG, what an amazing imaginative mind you have here! Hugs ;) Kw
Wow! … It’s amazing stories Kins!! :-) thanks for made me speechless after reading the second story! ;-) it’s so sweet yet so unbelievable, but I also know that something like that happens in real life, though sometimes I am wondering if fate is really exist or it just an excuse of explaining the unexplainable. anyway … I am looking forward for more updates from you for sure… And if you need more numbers, just let us know… Lol… I am sure that not only me who will be eager to share those numbers ;-)
So very wonderful. I love your stories and your imagination. Thank you for these wonderful wonderful stories.
Amazing, as always.
Loved them both. Thank you!
I …can’t find a word……your 1st is soo Ingenious…Imagine a baby “talking”..while still in a womb ….and being funny too. lol… Ears: doneFingernails: doneTesticles….mmmmm…. not growing any of those….just like her Momma…lol.. and your 2nd…Gives me Goosebumps… “Wow the are meant to be in each others life.” thank you Kins40. …really enjoyed this one.
Both parts were great, and thanks for using my number :)
Hahaha sooo cute! I love it!
Wonderful stories.Thank you.
I don’t comment very often, but I just had to on this one. So very different, interesting, touching, exciting, unique. I could go on and on. I just love your stories and the way you write about these two. I so enjoy reading anytime I see a post from you. These little snippets are the best and I think you could turn many of them into longer stories if you’d like. hint hint. :) Anyway, please continue…I love and look forward to them. Thanks again!! :)
That embryology lesson was really cute. Thank you kins40. I just love your stories!
“I’ll have myself transformed into a fully flipped locked-n-loaded womb-fruit waiting for the countdown to launch!” hahahaha!!!!
I could just picture this in my head and it totally made me laugh out loud! So so good…
So loved the baby in the womb perspective and the roundabout photo – Unusual stories, nice, leave a warm glow – thanks.