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Story written on April 4, 2012 by kins40.
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And right know, she is doing what she does best. Her incredible touch is all over me. We are not only talking about agile, diligent, thorough finger pads.
No.
Her whole body is touching mine. The skin is the largest sensory organ any human being possesses and she is utilising it, the only way she knows how. Her body is making love to mine.
But it has now gone beyond the limits and limitations of sight, sound, smell, taste and touch.
Because loving and being loved by Bette Porter is letting her reach straight into your soul and touch it.
83.
Bette arrived in the kitchen that morning and stood by the doorway for a few seconds observing the woman who had shared her life all these years.
Tina was standing, her back to her, perfectly still, staring out of the window. It was early and the weak winter sun filtered through the quiet space, illuminating along its projecting rays all the little dust particles suspended in the air.
She was wrapped in her favourite warm robe and her hands held onto the lapels as she crossed her arms to gather the fabric together and closer to her neck so as to ward off the cold, her advanced years made her feel, always.
Bette smiled a smile of happiness at the fact that after all this time the sight of the woman she had adored for the last several decades still made her heart flutter and her face light up. But that smile was tinged with melancholy.
Because the scene in the kitchen was now a familiar one.
Tina standing alone, still very much unaware of her wife’s presence only a few feet away. Every morning of every day, she stared out of the window and Bette knew that even though nothing incongruous was looking back at her, the outdoor setting was one of evident and profound confusion.
"What is today going to bring? " Bette thought to herself quietly.
Would she find the cereals box in the fridge again or the house keys in the silverware drawer?
Since Tina’s diagnosis, life had changed quite a bit, in actual fact it had changed dramatically. But Bette never failed to remember the good times and over the years there had been many.
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Nice job…really great stories!
How strange is it that I found myself thinking about you these past few days K. Hmmm what does one say, I think I became saddened at 83, not for it was badly written, but for the turmoil my heart endured. If had me thinking these feeble thoughts. Had me choked up for a little while as my mind went into over drive. Such love yet knowing sometimes you were a complete stranger to the woman you have always loved. I will admit I was scared comparing it to the reality life brings. i always say your stories are amazing, which as a matter of fact they’re, but I found myself lost within that part. Although sad, I continued to read and 3 made up up for the fear that came to light. I will message you. Thanks again for my heartache and freedom to admit my thoughts. C x
Just in case you need more numbers mine would be; 24.
I wish I had your (and a long list of others) talent for story telling. I use crayons while you use brush strokes. Absolutely beautiful K, I wasn’t aware of the number lotto or I would’ve participated as well. Oh well, I loved every “digit” of this story. Thank you 😘
Fabulous! Story 83 was tender, poignant and a sad reality. The vast majority of TiBette stories show them in their 20s-40s not in their elder years. They are still beautiful together. Brava!
Kins!!! :-)) so happy to see you back! You made my morning! Thanks!! :o)x your writing almost ALWAYS bring sweet tender moment to my heart… Some like the 83… Sweet tender yet sad :-/ it’s real life issues and it kinda remind me that your writing is part of FF! :-p lol.. And I thought you asked number for lotto :-D anyway.. Thanks for sharing another great story. Will keep looking forward to your next update ;-) enjoy the day! ^^,
Beautifully written. I got a little teary at 83, but no. 3 made up for it. If it’s not too late, I’ll throw in no. 17.
My day is complete..you’re back! Wow such incredible stories..thanks so much!!
That was absolutely wonderful. Loved it all. Excellent writing have missed your story telling. Thank you again.
Very cool way of putting a couple of shorts stories together! Ingenious really!!
I’m out of words to say… it was *sigh* deliciously beautiful… and I gotta say reading stories like this made me think about things…
That was great and sad and tear at number 83 but number 3 made it better. That was beautiful and thanks for sharing this with us!
Thank you Kins for using my number in your first set of stories. “5” made me tingle, “83” made me teary eyed and “3” was just HOT! I remember well the day I needed glasses, but I didn’t get the response Bette did. Lol! Well done and thanks.
Fantastic, as always. Sweet and touching. Thank you.
I’m not done reading.I’m in the beginning of the third part But I have to post this.. Cuz, really taken me aback to your.. “83” Specially when Bette said these… “Because it is not for you to remember, but for the ones around you who love you the most,” Bette explained simply, producing a little box tied with a multicoloured ribbon and a silver decoration which read “83”.”Happy Birthday, Darling.”..Bravo Kins, Bravo!going to read again.
Me like the glasses too…[Drooling]..Hey forgot to add mine..13..
Welcome back Kins :D I always got overwhelmed by Tibette getting old together it always brings tears to my eyes I don’t know why!!! but these installments r very wonderfully written, and the last one is really funny ;D thank u for sharing ur talent with us.
Just wonderful, yes 83 really had me thinking. just magical
You are an amazing writer.Great stories.Thank you.PPS
Kins, what can I say. I am so honored that you chose my number to begin this new project of yours. Sight, sound, touch, taste and smell are a major part of every relationship. Sometimes I think we forget how lucky we are to experience these wonderful sensations. 83 had me in tears. Just the thought that you could be with someone so long and one day they won’t remember you and the past you’ve shared is heartbreaking. You wrote it beautifully though. As for 3, well I have to laugh at that one. Simply because Tina’s reaction to Bette wearing glasses is how I react when my partner wears hers! So hot!!! Anyway, this was a perfect trio! Sensuous, Heartfelt, and Witty. I love your writing and can hardly wait for your next installment.
Aww kins, glad you’re back… 83 was really lovely especially how gentle bette was. I work with the elderly and i have totally embraced a little 97 year old lady who feels like a surrogate grandmother…i have learned so much seeing life through her eyes so this was story was special to me
So happy to see you are back. Nobody can write stories the way you can that leaves me happy, sad, teary eyed, choked up and emotional. You have such a wonderful way with words!
wonderfull update i like it thank you morrreeeee please!!!!
Oh kins you know I’m your biggest fan I will read absolutely anything you write, 83 reminded me of the Notebook heh, but you brought it home with 3, she only has a correction of 3? That’s nothing! I have one of 9! Haha that made me feel better about wearing glasses. I bet Bette would be even more sexy with glasses. Keep them coming girl