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Oasis Part 1
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“Are you becoming a Scientologist. I know Tom Cruise and Catherine Bell are hot, but you don’t have to follow them into the religion. A hot gal like you could hook up with either of them in a more traditional way.” I knew I should have stopped her, but if I was honest I missed this more then I can say. I really should consider getting myself into therapy, because that does not bode well for my mental health.
“I just hope that you don’t have any designs on becoming their wife, because I think brain washing is part of the overall requirement for that.”
“Alice, what are you talking about?” I’m no where near as lost as I act, but it’s always entertaining to find out the thought process that bought the conversation to somewhere, unexpected and frankly unfathomable. For someone that had a potential of being narcissistic like Alice did, she was easily derailed from the conversation I was trying to lead us into. I should know better then attempting to control the conversation.
“You said you talked to God, like Joan of Arc… I wonder if she was as cute as the babe from that show, about Joan.” Alice looks over at me expectantly, like I would have even the faintest clue what she was talking about. I wonder if it was something that we used to watch together when I was sick. I don’t really recall a lot that happened over that period of time, sometimes I was just so out of it. There are days I wonder how much of my life was lived in that limbo. It’s not healthy to dwell on it though, my sister does it enough for me.
The patting on my shoulder brings my attention back to Alice, “C’mon, you have to know. Joan, she’s hot. Her dad was in 7 wives for 7 brothers.” Now it was my turn to look perplexed, no that word doesn’t even cover it. I was discombobulated.
“How on Earth am I meant to know a girls name because of a movie her father was in?”
No matter how much I wanted to get annoyed at Alice, her smile was infectious, and her laughter was one of the most beautiful melodies in this life. “Well, obviously they look alike. Hot daughter means hot father, right?”
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Wow! What a treat to have two stories from you now. This is a great start and I can’t wait to see where you are going to go with it. Please post again soon.
Thank you for such a great beginning! Love Alice and can’t wait to see where this goes. pps
I like this start please continue just give us Tina and then we will be complete. We have a lot to be revealed to us. Let’s get this party started. You’re right “Light” is very heavy but you are telling the story in such a creative way and with such powerful emotions that one can not help being fully immersed in the story yet see all the love that is very evident within the characters, and their flaws. Makes you want to shake some of them till they rattle. PPS
Wow, Deean! This is surely a good start for a fresh new story! Can’t wait how you may unfold it. Please take us along on the ride. *wink* We know it will be amazing. PPS Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
It doesn’t HAVE to have Tina in it to be complete and a wonderful story!
I just read it again… yeah my mind was beyond immersed… and OMG the way you make environments feel alive… the way you personified the desert and the feelings… that was just amazing… I cannot wait to see what you do next and well… you blow me away… I’m going to have to re-evaluate my own writing… cause you are an inspiration… “Words, once they are printed, have a life of their own.” – Carol Burnett I can tell you straight out that your writing your words your literary soul do just this… love and hugs, JC
Hello My Beautiful Dee… I can totally understand what you mean by sometimes taking some distance from one piece and starting another… sometimes we need to refocus… and well… this is completely amazing… so very different but so much like your other one… you harvest emotions… you have a powerful soul that is just so full of emotions… so full of passion and powerful emotions… I am in awe… I am blown away with just how incredibly beautiful and brilliant your literary soul is… I hope to talk to you about your creative process… your desire and love for words is an inspiration… wow… just beautiful… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever Talented Eunichick)
WOW this is scene is so alive makes me feel like i’m really there! don’t rush any of ur stories!:)PPS
Well indeed this is something different and I am definitely interested to see what happens in here. Many questions popping up. There is a light and humorous touch while we are also seeing something hard and painful underneath. Catherine Bell is a Scientologist too?? She is hot all right! I can definitely understand why you want to take a break from the other one, it is soo heavy, but so finely crafted as well. Looking forward to more here!
what happened to bette why is or was she so sick?Al is a good friend to have i like the plot