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Oasis Part 1
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“Not true, are we forgetting the Steven Tyler, Liv Tyler father daughter genetics here?” Logic does not become Alice Pieszecki.
“They don’t count. Steven Tyler is hot because he makes music. Being a member of one of the tightest rock bands ever to come out of Boston gives him honourary hot status.”
“So everyone can be hot if they have the right connections and talents?” I think that’s what the point was here, at least I hope it was. If only I had any recollection of what lead us down this path of critiquing men to begin with. It’s not that I can’t appreciate mans form aesthetically, it’s just the idea of them being hot didn’t always sit well.
It was often forgotten in Alice’s need to get laid that most of her friends were Lesbian and not Bi. “Yeah, Hitchcock is the ugliest hot ever.” Her brain was some sort of sick magazine show that jumped from one topic to another in a seemingly logical order but it was all really random.
I closed my eyes and rested my head back on the headrest. The momentary second wind that Alice’s appearance caused had drained me to the point I was too tired to move my friend off my lap. Too tired to move my weary body to the bed. I dreamed about my bed the last month, the contoured pillows, fresh linen that smelt like sandalwood or lavender depending on whether I did the washing or my sister did.
I drifted off, glad to be home and happy that despite my frequent absences that I was miss. A soft kiss was pressed to my forehead as I felt Alice get up off me. “C’mon,” she encouraged, pulling my hands and throwing one of my arms over her shoulders – one of hers around my waist – to help support me on the trek to bed.
“Im sorry honey, I didn’t realise how exhausted you were.” There was nothing to be sorry for, she was just surprised to see me. How could anyone be angry at that display of love.
I didn’t even notice that we had arrived in the bedroom until I was pushed onto my bed. It was heavenly, it had to have been stuffed with the wings of Angels, there was no other explanation. I must of dozed off for a moment, because when I came too Alice had just pulled off my shirt, leaving me in my vest.
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Wow! What a treat to have two stories from you now. This is a great start and I can’t wait to see where you are going to go with it. Please post again soon.
Thank you for such a great beginning! Love Alice and can’t wait to see where this goes. pps
I like this start please continue just give us Tina and then we will be complete. We have a lot to be revealed to us. Let’s get this party started. You’re right “Light” is very heavy but you are telling the story in such a creative way and with such powerful emotions that one can not help being fully immersed in the story yet see all the love that is very evident within the characters, and their flaws. Makes you want to shake some of them till they rattle. PPS
Wow, Deean! This is surely a good start for a fresh new story! Can’t wait how you may unfold it. Please take us along on the ride. *wink* We know it will be amazing. PPS Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
It doesn’t HAVE to have Tina in it to be complete and a wonderful story!
I just read it again… yeah my mind was beyond immersed… and OMG the way you make environments feel alive… the way you personified the desert and the feelings… that was just amazing… I cannot wait to see what you do next and well… you blow me away… I’m going to have to re-evaluate my own writing… cause you are an inspiration… “Words, once they are printed, have a life of their own.” – Carol Burnett I can tell you straight out that your writing your words your literary soul do just this… love and hugs, JC
Hello My Beautiful Dee… I can totally understand what you mean by sometimes taking some distance from one piece and starting another… sometimes we need to refocus… and well… this is completely amazing… so very different but so much like your other one… you harvest emotions… you have a powerful soul that is just so full of emotions… so full of passion and powerful emotions… I am in awe… I am blown away with just how incredibly beautiful and brilliant your literary soul is… I hope to talk to you about your creative process… your desire and love for words is an inspiration… wow… just beautiful… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever Talented Eunichick)
WOW this is scene is so alive makes me feel like i’m really there! don’t rush any of ur stories!:)PPS
Well indeed this is something different and I am definitely interested to see what happens in here. Many questions popping up. There is a light and humorous touch while we are also seeing something hard and painful underneath. Catherine Bell is a Scientologist too?? She is hot all right! I can definitely understand why you want to take a break from the other one, it is soo heavy, but so finely crafted as well. Looking forward to more here!
what happened to bette why is or was she so sick?Al is a good friend to have i like the plot