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Oasis Part 2
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She pulled me tight to her body, her arms squeezing the breath out of me. This is the reunion I hoped for and dreamed of. This is all I wanted and more.
Her lips were close to my ear, “I missed you baby girl. I missed you so much.” There were tears in her voice, and I could feel the splash of the fall on my bare shoulder. “I’m so glad you’re home.”
“Me too.” I whispered back, and I really was.
Gently I pulled out of her embrace, “are the girls here yet?” I asked, excitement starting to colour my voice. Bouncing on the balls of my feet, I impatiently waited for the answer.
Kit smiled at me, knowing how much I loved our little family despite the distance I had put between us. “They didn’t want to see you sis, so decided to stay at the Planet to listen to a new Jazz act we got in.”
I smiled back at her, “Jazz. Can we go? Please?” I missed music. Don’t get me wrong I got to listen to music on most of the planes I caught, but honestly apart from the Walkman I brought in he 80′s I had no access to music.
Kit laughed, brightening the room instantly, “I thought we could check them out tomorrow night, I know how much you love Jazz.” I could start to feel myself vibrate with pure joy. Jazz at my sister club. There are few things more powerful then simple joys.
The door to my room was thrown open by an enthusiastic Alice, who was bouncing around like she hadn’t seen me a couple of hours ago. Just as she was going to throw herself into my arms again, Shane jumped in first. Her hugs were some of the warmest and most touching, despite how tentative she was in giving them. One day I only hope that she would be as free with her hugs as she was with her love.
“Shane.” I whisper more for me then her. She pulls out of the embrace, resting her hands on the upper arms. “You look amazing,” she tells me, leering at me as if I was her next prey.
“Gorgeous darling, if not a little too thin.” I hadn’t have heard her come into the room, but I was bursting at the seems to see my old college roommate.
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So who is in talks with a publisher.fantastic update here. Im cannot wait for more what is Bette’s job by the way?
Thanks for the update. After reading the story and JC’s comment, what is Bette running from. I gathered that much from the first chapter and is Tina in this story, in Bette’s life in the past or future. Making assumptions is dangerous, however, that is all I’m left with. Is or has Tina been a love interest and like JC, something horrendous has happened to Bette and Kit, of course, wants to keep her close by to watch over her and Bette isn’t having any of it. Guess I’ll have to wait for more chapters to reveal the answers. Great post. PPS
I just read both chapter’s, is Bette sick? I so can not wait to see this wonerful story unfold. Thank you Deean
I am enjoying how the story is unfolding…keep the chapters coming. Please?
I too am enjoying the story, and can’t wait to learn more. Hopefully Tina will appear to help Bette with what ever she has/is going through.
No hopefully Tina will NOT come and take care of Bette, she has enough problems already. It is not written somewhere that every fic with Bette in it MUST have Tina as well!! Oh the burdens Bette carries are heavy indeed, we can see this, and I can only imagine what has caused those burdens. I have to say, that as comical as Alice may seem on paper, having an adult friend who was stuck at the emotional age of 8 would get old really fast,and I wonder if she is emotionally able to give Bette the support she needs, rather than just being comic relief. Dana too, it seems as though this Dana is much farther into her shell than “our” Dana, and needs alot of nurturing. I wonder if they even know what her burdens are? It’s possible that only Kit knows what is going on? it seems like there is more than one thing, there is physical issues and I think extremely heavy emotional issues. If I amy ask, Justin, WHAT is all this “cuzzie’ stuff?
Hello My Beautiful Dee… hmmmmmmphh… Bette is in so much turmoil… such an emotional distress… the idea of going to an “Oasis” is not lost on me… it is a place of healing be it physical or emotional… and I fear that Bette has suffered within both realms… I fear she has lost something… there is a subtext throughout your lyrical way with words to screams that something is amiss in her life… sickness… or the loss of something so incredible it would send you to such a harsh environment to seek some kind of balance… you have such an uncanny ability to make one think about the trajectories and pathways in which each of your characters might think and feel… but the reference to Bette’s physical conditions leave one to feel that she is doing hard penance upon her soul… you my friend are completely amazing… and yes inspiring… you might not see it but you just completely inspire me, mucho love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever talented Eunichick and Newly Crowned Cuzzie to T_Daze)
Bette seems to be sending an SOS, seem in a lot distress, Is Tina in this? She has been gone for 4 months and seem to be very tired,is she ill Has something terrible happen in her life. Our Dana is still quite but not the stronger type now. Thanks