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Oasis Part 2
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“Hells” I screamed, deafening Shane who put her pinky in her ear as if to knock the ringing out.
“Bells,” she responded, her face breaking into a smile as she sauntered through the room. Helena didn’t believe in rushing, she thought that everything worth having could wait for her to have it.
“Fuck. Did you have to scream in my ear Bette.” Shane groused at me.
Instead of waiting for her to come to me, I decided to met her half way bringing her into a tight hug. “Why didn’t you tell us you were coming back?” She asked, trying to make sense of the fact that I didn’t have her pick me up for the airport, or ask for the use of the Peabody Jet.
“Later.” I promise. I wanted to see everyone first, to hold them in my arms. Last time I saw them was amide tears and sadness. I had looked forward tot his moment since I had left.
Dana was lagging behind Alice; always too afraid to come out and draw attention to herself. Her shyness one of the many endearing qualities to the musician. “Dane, honey.” I called out to her, I didn’t want to startle her, I just wanted to greet her.
The small smile that graced Dana’s lips warmed my heart. Gingerly I drew her into a hug, which was more of a cuddle; one you gave a child after they fell and hurt themselves, design to reassure, to comfort. Dana was so much softer then the rest of us, so we often felt it was our place to protect her, defend her… cherish her is ways that her family chose not too.
When Dana finally drew back from the hug, Alice with all the patience of a 2 week old swept me up in another hug. “You’re home. You’re home. You’re home.” She chanted, dancing around the room with me in her arms.
“Who are you talking to Alice?” Helena asked, casting a cheeky grin to the rest of the room.
“Huh?” Alice grunted in reply, lost in her own world.
“Girls, let’s let this one over here get changed.” Kit ordered, shepherding them all from my room. A room that felt so much larger then a minute ago, I missed the laughter already.
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So who is in talks with a publisher.fantastic update here. Im cannot wait for more what is Bette’s job by the way?
Thanks for the update. After reading the story and JC’s comment, what is Bette running from. I gathered that much from the first chapter and is Tina in this story, in Bette’s life in the past or future. Making assumptions is dangerous, however, that is all I’m left with. Is or has Tina been a love interest and like JC, something horrendous has happened to Bette and Kit, of course, wants to keep her close by to watch over her and Bette isn’t having any of it. Guess I’ll have to wait for more chapters to reveal the answers. Great post. PPS
I just read both chapter’s, is Bette sick? I so can not wait to see this wonerful story unfold. Thank you Deean
I am enjoying how the story is unfolding…keep the chapters coming. Please?
I too am enjoying the story, and can’t wait to learn more. Hopefully Tina will appear to help Bette with what ever she has/is going through.
No hopefully Tina will NOT come and take care of Bette, she has enough problems already. It is not written somewhere that every fic with Bette in it MUST have Tina as well!! Oh the burdens Bette carries are heavy indeed, we can see this, and I can only imagine what has caused those burdens. I have to say, that as comical as Alice may seem on paper, having an adult friend who was stuck at the emotional age of 8 would get old really fast,and I wonder if she is emotionally able to give Bette the support she needs, rather than just being comic relief. Dana too, it seems as though this Dana is much farther into her shell than “our” Dana, and needs alot of nurturing. I wonder if they even know what her burdens are? It’s possible that only Kit knows what is going on? it seems like there is more than one thing, there is physical issues and I think extremely heavy emotional issues. If I amy ask, Justin, WHAT is all this “cuzzie’ stuff?
Hello My Beautiful Dee… hmmmmmmphh… Bette is in so much turmoil… such an emotional distress… the idea of going to an “Oasis” is not lost on me… it is a place of healing be it physical or emotional… and I fear that Bette has suffered within both realms… I fear she has lost something… there is a subtext throughout your lyrical way with words to screams that something is amiss in her life… sickness… or the loss of something so incredible it would send you to such a harsh environment to seek some kind of balance… you have such an uncanny ability to make one think about the trajectories and pathways in which each of your characters might think and feel… but the reference to Bette’s physical conditions leave one to feel that she is doing hard penance upon her soul… you my friend are completely amazing… and yes inspiring… you might not see it but you just completely inspire me, mucho love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving Cuzzie to the ever talented Eunichick and Newly Crowned Cuzzie to T_Daze)
Bette seems to be sending an SOS, seem in a lot distress, Is Tina in this? She has been gone for 4 months and seem to be very tired,is she ill Has something terrible happen in her life. Our Dana is still quite but not the stronger type now. Thanks