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Oasis Part 4
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Pulling out my mobile phone I give Alice a call. I have no desire to eat lunch alone, and I want to catch up on some of the local gossip. That, and Alice is the only person that has the day off today.
Alice answered after 5 rings, sounding sleepy “’lo”.
I couldn’t help but smile, there was something about a sleeping Alice that could instantly remind you of a grumpy 15 year old or a cute 10 year old, I was unsure which one I was going to get but it’d be fun either way.
“You can’t possibly still be in bed.” I reply happily, knowing that it’ll annoy her. Baiting Alice really should be an Olympic sport, it’s got something in it everyone can enjoy whether it’s for spectator, or competitor.
“L’ng night.” Came the slurred response. When Helena and Alice dropped me off last night I didn’t think they were going to hit a club or have a party of some sort. They were talking to me about the possibility of having a quiet dinner and maybe seeing a movie. I always thought that there was something mystical about movie theatres, about how so much pain could happen, and be felt within those 4 walls and when people exited it was like they were lighter some how.
After mentioning it to the Bobsy twins, I was informed by Alice that that logic didn’t apply when you saw a Michael Moore movie. Being sure I was meant to know what she was talking about I had nodded. Thankfully Helena understood my confusion and explained. I wasn’t sure I was all that interested in seeing the films, they seemed questionably biased.
“You up for lunch?” As much as I wanted to play with her, I wanted to go and eat more. It also meant to could see the look on her face when we attempted to drive each other nuts, rather then waiting for it.
“Nugh…” Alice must have really had a bad night, because as far and incoherent responses go this was quite high. She must have really been exhausted, or hung over. I really should talk to her about her heavy nights, she needs to cut back before she starts to fuck up her health.
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Great Chapter!!! Thank you PPS So love Dana.
Yea, I’m sticking with it. In this chapter, Bette sounds like she is really sick and doesn’t want to admit it to herself. I haven’t read anything that says she smokes so it must be soemthing that she has picked up in her travels. Hopefully it won’t be life threatening but anything tropical or something from the middle east may be just that. Hope not. Post when you can.
Another great chapter. Poor Bette is sick but I get the feeling she’s been sick like this before. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Great narration but sad undertones as if something is looming. PPS.
Dearest Deean: As you are adding other elements to the characters you are making this story more interesting and with lots of possibilities. Bette obviously has a weird illness, which she confuses with the flu. Hmmm We love Dana overcoming her shyness and that she is a musician. -We really liked Dana in the show.- Alice numb responses are just priceless. Hahaha Bette certainly needs medical attention. It seems she is being obsessive about not letting her friends know that she is not feeling well. We think her friends would be more than willing to help, if she lets them to carry on. Thanks for this magnificent update, Deean. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Bette should really see a DR. If she is coughing a chest hurting.she shouldnot be diving, air bubble in her lungs. Dana a singer, sound good to me. thanks
wow im first Dana as a musician really…you know something i can see that but she does need to do something about that confidence.Bette needs a doc im sure of that and what happened to Alice i mean she was dead beyond the means of extreme.Loved the update cant wait for more.
Hello My Beautiful Dee… Ok… that is freaking HOT… Bette on a motorcycle… *THUD* OMG… so freaking sweet… I love how in-tuned with nature this Bette is… she really does seem like someone who values the beauties that the earth has to offer and her mind is a whirlwind of knowledge… it was so cute how she reacted to Alice being all sloshed… the idea of Dana as a singer is such a powerful one… it seems that art is a common thing amongst these friends… I’m still wondering what is wrong with Bette… its more then a flu… maybe these recent rumblings are a flu but there is something deeper… hmmmmm… the idea that Bette will travel and we will see how these ladies react and interact as she comes and goes is so neat… once again you have completely blown be away with your sheer talents and willingness to continue to move forward… much love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and ever loving cuzzie to the ever talented and lovely Eunichick and Newly crowned Cuzzie of T_Daze)
I hope that Bette gets to doctor very soon. Thanks for the update and can’t wait for more.