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Oasis Part 5
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Just as I was getting up to follow Helena, Dana rested her hand on my forehead checking my temperature. “You’re cool now.” She stated, “it seems you were right, nothing to worry about.” Smiling sheepishly she shrugged her shoulders. “I was just…”
“Worried I know.” I finished for her. I couldn’t blame her for worrying, it’s hard to let go of the past, and as much as I hate to be coddled by them all I couldn’t ask them too. They are the most loyal friends that anyone could ask for.
The drive to Alice’s place was quick, although convincing her to get out of the apartment wasn’t so easy. Pulling up outside, we called to let her know we were hear and it went straight to the answering machine 3 times. Having had experience with this Shane, who we picked up before we left my place, pulled out Alice’s spare key and we headed up to let ourselves in.
What we found was comical. Alice was half dressed, she was wearing red lacy lingerie and her black 6 inch heals and little else.
“Al,” Shane coughs, covering her mouth the keep from laughing.
Alice squeaked, jumping about an inch off the ground. “What the fuck?” She screamed, holding a remote control in her hand as if she could magically stop the moment.
I couldn’t restrain myself and I started to laugh, which opened the floodgates for the others. For a good minute or so we didn’t even bother to try and smother our laughter, but slowly we pulled ourselves together, enough the only the occasional giggle.
“Hey.” Alice yelled at us, waving her arms as if she had been trying to get our attention for awhile. “I am being honoured tonight. I am going to be the most Honoured Alice and I demand you treat me with the respect honour deserves.”
We all started to laugh again, holding onto our sides as our joy worked muscles we seldom used. The laughter irrupted my throat, causing me to cough, loudly. The coughs pulled at my chest and precipitated a stabbing pain that felt like a needle was being pushed into my lung, roughly. I bent over for a second to try and lessen my pain before the coughs subsided.
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Dearest Deean: We are so sorry to learn that you had an accident on your elbow. Hope it heals nicely, that it doesn’t bother you that much and that you might recover soon. Please take very good care of yourself.- As for the story, we are beginning to enjoy Dana, Alice and are much concerned about Bette’s health. Hmmm You are making some interesting developments on the story, which are very appealing, plot wise. We are savouring all of them. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Dana was always shown to be a good friend and here she proves it by taking Bette to the docs.Nice updat i want more
Hope Bette doesn’t have some weird, tropical, 3rd world disease.
Sounds like Bette is pretty sick but she’s been sick like this before, right? Both of your stories are fantastic and I look forward to new chapters on both.
I am sorry too about the bed and your elbow. I hope it feels better soon. As for this one, what is the mysterious ailment? Bette doesn’t have HIV does she? Eunichick already played this card, and between the both of you, what with Dying of the Light as well, y’all seem pretty anxious for Bette to shuffle off this mortal coil! How about Tina getting a fatal disease for once, just to even it out? I am not sure about this Dana. She is sweet, but there is shy and then there is… Did something happen to her to make her this way?? Ah, another story! Speaking of which, you are going to let us hang and hang and hang, to know whether Bette is alive and ok? Hopefully not TOO long!
Somewhere in fanfic heaven, Bette is wondering just what she did to piss off Dee. (just kidding)I’m looking forward to the doctor’s appt and some clarification about Bette’s earlier illness vs her current one. My chest hurts just listening to Bette laugh with her friends.Love Alice’s ‘House’- what a great idea, absolutely one that could be duplicated all over. I found the comment about the kids being ‘too old to adopt’ odd- as i adopted my five year old foster son when he was seven- but we both know there a lot more foster kids than adoptive homes and plenty of need for a house like the one you conjured. Hope you are well soon! (selfishly i want more updates to both tales!)p.s. where in Dying of the Light did you add that paragraph you found that you didn’t include previously? thanks. Feel better!
er…that is to say…i adopted my son at seven, but he was 5 when he first came to live with me as my foster son.
My Beautiful Dee… ahhhhh that sucks about the bed but more so your elbow… I am off to the movies but will be back… you completely rock it out… take good care and talk to you later… mwah… love and hugs, JC
Thank you for this wonderful story and I hope you feel better. Please post soon.
Thanks for posting this is a wonderful story with so much attention given to the ability of this family of friends to give love and share their lives wiith the children that have been written off for whatever reason. Such a great lesson in love and humanitarianism. If every community in our great nation would take on a project like this we could go a long way to eradicate homeliness amog foster children. Sincerely hope that Bette does not have some disease about which nothing can be done. Wonderful story. Since Tina has not shown up in this story yet, will she be one of the doctor’s that Bette sees. If so, hopefylly she will have the cure-all for Bette. PPS