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Original of the Species
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Chapter 11
When Bette returned to her kitchen, back in her uniform, she discovered much to her delight that Laurel had done a wonderful job at running the kitchen. Most of what was needed for the next day’s brunch was done, some of the other chefs were cooking dinner for them and the rest of the staff, and some others were already cleaning some of the stations.
“Well congratulations Chef Graham” Bette said smiling at Laurel.
“Thank you Chef Porter” The brunette coldly said as she briefly made eye contact with he boss.
“Wow, what’s with the Siberian Husky eyes?” Bette said surprised and Laurel just looked at her inquisitively.
“Yes… Siberian husky eyes… whenever you’re mad at something your eyes turn ice-blue instead of sparkling and warm blue” Bette said shyly. “Something happened in my absence?” She added.
“Nothing happened Chef Porter, we’re right on schedule and we democratically chose what to eat for dinner, so there was no need to raise my voice” Laurel said surprised that Bette would notice if her eyes changed accordingly to her mood. No one had ever said anything like that to her and deep down the brunette was touched by Bette’s words. But she was determined not to show it.
“Aaand we’re back to calling me Chef Porter… ok Laurel talk to me, what’s wrong” Bette indicated for them to move to the back of the kitchen, where the big dinning table was.
“Nothing is wrong Chef Por… Bette” Laurel replied trying to sound convincing.
“I leave for half an hour and when I return you’re looking at me with icy eyes and calling me by my last name. So either someone on my staff said something to you or you’re just mad at me for some reason, so whatever it is I would like us to talk about it” Bette gently said, for she knew how to handle crisis with her staff. She had learnt the hard way that screaming wouldn’t get her far, instead she used a more understanding and sensitive approach. A big part of what goes wrong in a kitchen has to do with rivalries and hurt egos, and that could occasionally be reflected on the food. Bette wasn’t gonna let that happen.
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memaw18 says
this story is sssooooooooooo good please anne83 keep the chapters coming xxx
ttscorpio29 says
I feel like I’m being teased!! So I was wondering how long do we have to suffer before we get the next chapter
akalittlered says
I am so loving this story!!! I so hope Tina show’s up at the beach hose to see Bette. Thank you so much anne83 PPVS
scarlett26 says
Laurel Graham?? Hahahahaha! Am I the only one that caught that? Surely not!? Great job as always! :)
pattifloatn says
The heat is turning up quite fast now. I am glad that the Laurel situation is taken care of. I wonder what Tina has up her sleeve for Bette.
onthebrink says
I love the frequent updates. It helps me get even more into the story. Thanks for posting!
wkm says
Sooooooooooo good. Love it. Thanks for posting so quickly. Puts a smile on my face when I see a new chapter.
ayesha23 says
aaaahhh the slow tease…this is a great story. They are both in for a hell of a ride. Poor Laurel. maybe she can hook up with alice. pps
socal says
Wonderful! I second everything the ladies above have said. I’m perfectly happy with a few chapters of tension-building – as long as the tension is er…*relieved* at some point, LOL. PPS!!!!
AmandaMG says
love this… tina drop your prents off and make a u-turn and go back to bettes.. pps
rsa says
Great story. Looking forward to more.
chelseagal says
Well reading Bette in this story as a chef is just wonderful and so different. I am loving this story and thanks for posting it. Keep the story lines coming
MSFS says
Excellent. I’m sure Tina will make a visit to Bette.
pekegal says
Tension-smension…yeap…you nailed it! I’d like to read a little more of the Kennards and what their reaction is going to be to Tina’s true love.
Dainty says
I looovvvveeeee this story and it just keeps getting better and better and better. Tina should drop her parents at the airport and go back to Bette. That is if Bette wants the company. Ans scarlet, no, I caught it too. I’m with ttscorpio, I, too, feel teased. Love it. Thanks so much for posting. PPS
Coffeemania says
reallyyyyyy cute couple ;)
OneStorm1 says
Lovely chapter, I cannot wait for the next chapter. PPS
Jackiee1 says
Tina should definately show up
Jackiee1 says
Tina should definately show up
ut says
That was great, love B&T so sweet and cute, can’t wait to see Tina to show up to suprise Bette for their date. Please post more, thanks!
lodeerca says
Right! The hours cannot go fast enough till the next post. Hope Tina gets it sorted out with her mum and leaves coming out behind her.
didi1956 says
Wonderful story,they are soooo cute.Thank you.
Sammer says
Hmmmm, I can’t wait to see what Tina has come up with for their first date.
Vixien00 says
Love it, Love it, Love it!!! Wonderful fic!! ;) PPS
mariam says
You are great to us by posting so often. Its like reading a book and I love it.Alice is so funny but so right hey. The feeling is building up between Bette and Tina and it will explod at some point lol AND I want to be there when it’s happen pmsl.Great sorry. PPVS
Livelylivy says
I hope Tina goes to the house! great I love it
cvu says
It’s hilarious the convo of Bette and Alice on the phone! Excuse me? Laurel, as in little student Laurel, asked you out… too? Oh man, I’ve gotta become a chef… I mean you go all the way up there to just work all weekend and you get asked out by two beautiful women. Now I stay in LA, I put on my best slutty clothes and all I get a parking ticket… that is just not fair” Alice said sarcastically as usual. “So what did you say to them?” Alice quickly addedI cannot make myself to stop laughing!…But you’ve made me feel so HOT AND BOTHERED When Tina go to see Bette in her kitchen..OH GOD DO I HAVE TO SAY. COME ON!..WRITE SOME NC-17 FOR US!… Please?
favcouple says
Thank you this story is just awesome then you for posting so regularly. Love this story.
celchic says
cant wait for the date, thats another great chapter before i head for work
OliviaKelly says
Wow this fic is becoming so great. I can’t stand it lol. And lmao at Alice. PPS!
Sharod says
I have always enjoyed strawberry sauce on my pancakes. I feel for Laurel, but I have funny feeling that this will not be the end of her pursuit of Bette. I loved Alice advice to Bette.