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Original of the Species
Laurel knew that Bette could be a bit blind at times, but when she realized something was up with someone she was not gonna let it go until she heard all about it and tried to solve it, if possible.
The sous-chef took a big breath and made eye contact with the brunette trying her very best not to blush, and started pacing around the eating area.
“Okay Bette here’s the thing… I’ve always been attracted to you. First I told myself that it was inappropriate since you were my teacher and boss. And then I just told myself that you were just too beautiful and smart and talented to notice I even existed… and then Caroline came and now… well nothing is stopping me now, so… would you like to go out on a date with me?” Laurel said speaking a mile a minute and then she stopped the pacing.
Bette just stood there for a few moments slowly processing everything that had been told to her. Did Laurel just ask me out? Bette thought.
“Well Laurel I… I don’t know what to say I mean, I’m flattered but I don’t think I have an answer to your question right now” Bette replied honestly.
“Is it because of that blonde that came twice today?” Laurel asked in a neutral tone.
“Look I’ll just be honest with you… you’re a beautiful, intelligent, extremely talented and funny woman, I just never… really…” Bette was struggling with her words.
“You’ve always seen me as a younger sister right?” Laurel asked and Bette nodded. “It shows in your eyes” The blue eyed brunette said disappointed, but at least she had tried it.
“That’s pretty much how I’ve always seen you… I’m sorry” Bette said sincerely.
“It’s ok, at least it was worth the try” Laurel said and lowered her eyes and Bette approached her and gave her a friendly hug.
“You are a wonderful woman and I am really flattered” Bette said after the embrace was over.
“You still haven’t answered my question, what’s with that blonde?” Laurel said with a shy smile, not really feeling any better but just trying to be the bigger person.
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memaw18 says
this story is sssooooooooooo good please anne83 keep the chapters coming xxx
ttscorpio29 says
I feel like I’m being teased!! So I was wondering how long do we have to suffer before we get the next chapter
akalittlered says
I am so loving this story!!! I so hope Tina show’s up at the beach hose to see Bette. Thank you so much anne83 PPVS
scarlett26 says
Laurel Graham?? Hahahahaha! Am I the only one that caught that? Surely not!? Great job as always! :)
pattifloatn says
The heat is turning up quite fast now. I am glad that the Laurel situation is taken care of. I wonder what Tina has up her sleeve for Bette.
onthebrink says
I love the frequent updates. It helps me get even more into the story. Thanks for posting!
wkm says
Sooooooooooo good. Love it. Thanks for posting so quickly. Puts a smile on my face when I see a new chapter.
ayesha23 says
aaaahhh the slow tease…this is a great story. They are both in for a hell of a ride. Poor Laurel. maybe she can hook up with alice. pps
socal says
Wonderful! I second everything the ladies above have said. I’m perfectly happy with a few chapters of tension-building – as long as the tension is er…*relieved* at some point, LOL. PPS!!!!
AmandaMG says
love this… tina drop your prents off and make a u-turn and go back to bettes.. pps
rsa says
Great story. Looking forward to more.
chelseagal says
Well reading Bette in this story as a chef is just wonderful and so different. I am loving this story and thanks for posting it. Keep the story lines coming
MSFS says
Excellent. I’m sure Tina will make a visit to Bette.
pekegal says
Tension-smension…yeap…you nailed it! I’d like to read a little more of the Kennards and what their reaction is going to be to Tina’s true love.
Dainty says
I looovvvveeeee this story and it just keeps getting better and better and better. Tina should drop her parents at the airport and go back to Bette. That is if Bette wants the company. Ans scarlet, no, I caught it too. I’m with ttscorpio, I, too, feel teased. Love it. Thanks so much for posting. PPS
Coffeemania says
reallyyyyyy cute couple ;)
OneStorm1 says
Lovely chapter, I cannot wait for the next chapter. PPS
Jackiee1 says
Tina should definately show up
Jackiee1 says
Tina should definately show up
ut says
That was great, love B&T so sweet and cute, can’t wait to see Tina to show up to suprise Bette for their date. Please post more, thanks!
lodeerca says
Right! The hours cannot go fast enough till the next post. Hope Tina gets it sorted out with her mum and leaves coming out behind her.
didi1956 says
Wonderful story,they are soooo cute.Thank you.
Sammer says
Hmmmm, I can’t wait to see what Tina has come up with for their first date.
Vixien00 says
Love it, Love it, Love it!!! Wonderful fic!! ;) PPS
mariam says
You are great to us by posting so often. Its like reading a book and I love it.Alice is so funny but so right hey. The feeling is building up between Bette and Tina and it will explod at some point lol AND I want to be there when it’s happen pmsl.Great sorry. PPVS
Livelylivy says
I hope Tina goes to the house! great I love it
cvu says
It’s hilarious the convo of Bette and Alice on the phone! Excuse me? Laurel, as in little student Laurel, asked you out… too? Oh man, I’ve gotta become a chef… I mean you go all the way up there to just work all weekend and you get asked out by two beautiful women. Now I stay in LA, I put on my best slutty clothes and all I get a parking ticket… that is just not fair” Alice said sarcastically as usual. “So what did you say to them?” Alice quickly addedI cannot make myself to stop laughing!…But you’ve made me feel so HOT AND BOTHERED When Tina go to see Bette in her kitchen..OH GOD DO I HAVE TO SAY. COME ON!..WRITE SOME NC-17 FOR US!… Please?
favcouple says
Thank you this story is just awesome then you for posting so regularly. Love this story.
celchic says
cant wait for the date, thats another great chapter before i head for work
OliviaKelly says
Wow this fic is becoming so great. I can’t stand it lol. And lmao at Alice. PPS!
Sharod says
I have always enjoyed strawberry sauce on my pancakes. I feel for Laurel, but I have funny feeling that this will not be the end of her pursuit of Bette. I loved Alice advice to Bette.