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Original of the Species
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Chapter 13
When Bette heard the blonde’s words she immediately lowered her face so it was resting on Tina’s shoulders, as their grip on another became tighter. They shyly started moving to the slow and beautiful tunes of the song.
As the song progressed Bette felt completely overwhelmed and intoxicated by Tina’s scent. She was sure she had never met a woman who smelled like Tina, and soon Bette was also realizing she had never met a woman who felt like Tina. For the brunette having Tina on her arms and in such a romantic setting, it felt like heaven. She had no words to even try and describe what she was feeling.
On the other hand Tina wasn’t feeling much different. She wasn’t aware that this particular feeling even existed. How could anyone feel so comfortable and safe and at the same time excruciatingly arousing? She felt safe and at ease with Bette, and she also felt an undeniable physical pull towards the chef, one that was starting to ache between her legs.
Bette was the first one to break their tight embrace in order to stare into those hazel eyes. She needed to know what was going through the blonde’s head. Bette needed to know if this feeling was mutual.
Tina just looked into those big brown pools she was so fond of sinking in and couldn’t help herself. Besides why should she? Now she knew what she wanted and what she wouldn’t be missing on anymore. So she lent forward and kissed those luscious lips that had been so tantalizing all night.
They started kissing slowly and very gently, like exploring one another for the first time ever. Bette kept on capturing Tina’s lower in between hers and ever so slightly sucking on it, which she discovered drove Tina crazy. The song had ended and so had their dance, but their kissing session had just begun.
Half an hour later Bette was sitting down on one of the sun lounges and Tina was straddling her. Bette’s fingers were entwined with the blonde’s and resting on Tina’s thighs. During those last thirty minutes their kisses had gone from shy and gentle to deep and lustful, and alternating back to shy and gentle whenever it got too much to handle.
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trecelovinit says
“I think…” that was HOT!!!
scarlett26 says
YES!! That was amazing! Great job, as always. :)
AmandaMG says
yeah bette… cone on tell us what you are thinking… i can fill in the blanks… love this story… pps
MSFS says
You were kidding about NC-17 because I need to get myself together, that was incredible.Very HOT HOT HOT. Hahahaha
favcouple says
Wow! That was just simply absolutely amazing. Thank you. Wonderful chapter. Love this story
Sammer says
You did an amazing job with the NC-17. That was reeeally hot.Please post again soon. I can’t wait to hear Bette explain to Tina what she’s thinking.
celchic says
After a hard day at work it was lovely to come home to a new chapter. excellent chapter by the way
socal says
Good grief! Don’t EVER doubt your NC-17s again, ya hear?!? That was HOT! PPS!
CamTurn says
Ummm…your NC-17s are the bomb!!! What is Bette thinking? The cliffhangers are killing me! GREAT job!!!
archie319 says
Holy hotness! I love it! PPS!
selle100 says
HOT HOT HOT… i like :) pps
mette hartmann says
Just simply perfect. Can´t wait for Bette to express her thoughts.
4Cara says
I just read your fic in one sitting and it’s great and very well written so I hope you’ll continue it.
don70 says
Im just re reading some stories and i love all of yours i hope you continue.
elizabeth15 says
PPS .. love the stories.. porfavor
wkm says
Great chapter, believe me you can write a N-17 chapter very well. HOT!
ut says
Oh damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
lodeerca says
Well…, that was worth all the waiting!!
pekegal says
Oh so yummy and tasty! You did awesome for your NC-17…HOT!!!
lilla= says
…ehm…How soon can you post?! :D
Dainty says
My stars, why in the world would you think you are not good at writing NC-17’s, if you were any better, I don’t think I could stand it. Fantastic job!! They are so good together in every way. Surely you will tell us what Bette was thinking and this NC-17 will continue for a little bit. Awesome post. Thanks for posting.
ayesha23 says
I think you did great, but you did not just leave it there? I want to know what Bette is thinking too. pps
mariam says
That you are HOT one Tina Kennard and I am not letting you go.And you are not good at NC-17? then we might pass out when you get good lol. PPVS
resultsonly says
now that was freaking fantastic!!
miamigrl says
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
didi1956 says
love ,love,love it.
akalittlered says
That was SMOKING HOT!!!! Very Amazing!!!! We so need to know what Bette is thinking. Thank you PPVS
miamigrl says
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
memaw18 says
wow! yes Anne cmon on what is bette thinking, 2 great chapters more please xxx
Vixien00 says
Wonderful post anne83… now please post soon cause we want to know what is Bette thinking!!! ;) PPS
rsa says
Totally love this story. Looking forward to more.
OliviaKelly says
Wow, who else needs a cold shower? I was totally hoping that you would have Bette carry Tina to the bedroom. And alas, you made my day! It is so incredibly sexy being carried to the bed. Ugh, I can’t describe it! This chapter was too sexy for words! PPS!
OneStorm1 says
Now that was hot. PPS
chelseagal says
Well that ws hot… interested in knowing what Bette is thinking..PPVS and thanks !!!
pattifloatn says
Ummmm, Wow, that was incredible. I think that Bette has fallen head over heels in love with Tina. I also think that Tina is in that same boat.
cvu says
Wow what a beautiful word you used.. Intense and hot but very amazingly gorgeous! can’t find the proper word to discribe how beautiful the word is.
JBtlw90 says
hey, just read ur story but i love it!! you should absolutly continue it!!
Sharod says
Oh my god that was hot and intense. I had a moment, your writing is so descriptive.