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Our first Christmas…Chapter 6
Previously:
She hangs up the phone and I fight back a tear. God, what’s wrong with me. Get a hold of yourself Bette. I trudge off to bed, the salsa long forgotten and fall face first into her pillow so I can have her scent with me all night long. I roll over and stare at her picture on the nightstand and start planning our Christmas in my mind. I want it to be spectacular and with any luck I can pull it off by the time she gets home.
Bette’s POV
Christmas Day:
I’m walking around my house with a cup of coffee in my hand trying to distract myself from the fact that once again I’m alone on Christmas day. I stop at the entrance to the living room and stare at the tree Tina and I decorated only 3 days ago. I allow myself to smile as I relive the child like glee she had as she placed decorations of the 6 foot spruce.
“Let’s string popcorn!”
“Are you crazy” I look at her skeptically, not quite sharing the same zest she has for decorating the tree.
“It’ll be fun, real old fashioned.”
I can’t help but smile at her. She’s so cute in Martha Stewart mode. “How about we stick with tinsel this year and next year we’ll work on the popcorn.”
“Spoilsport” she mock pouts at me and then sticks out her tongue at me.
I wrap a piece of garland around her waist and pull her to me. “I can think of better uses for that tongue.”
“If you’ll excuse me, I have to put tinsel on the tree.” She says with complete disinterest and turns away from me.
“You” I let out a low growl and slap her ass lightly. She throws a handful of tinsel at me and takes off into the other room, her beautiful laughter trailing behind her. I race after her with a smile on my face, finally making a Christmas memory I will want to remember.
I shake my head and continue to pace around the house with no particular direction. I can’t call Tina because she is at her grandparents and will call me when she gets home. I haven’t spoken to Kit in years. Melvin is on a business trip. I momentarily think about catching up on work, but immediately chastise myself for such thoughts. Tina would be horrified.
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(58 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
and i love you…this is so great, i knew tina will come home as soon as you mentioned hopeless romantic…so am i, and this chapter was indeed absolutely romantic and perfect…i demand sequel
Yeah, what the hell, go for it.
Al is so adorable. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think all TiBetters are hopelessly romantic. LOL
AND THAT WAS EXACTLY HOW I WANTED THIS STORY TO GO!!have to admit i had a feeling that you would take the very romantic route and that Tina would either not get on that plane or turn up on the day and you have done the story justice gotta love ya for it,infact im off to read it again its not just the NC17s i love i love the sappy stuff just as much!!!lol lookin forward to more just coz the hols are over doesnt mean this has to end yet!!!lol
“Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” Aww you’ve got the witty Alice and romantic B&T it’s a winning combo.
heehee… that was great!!! :)
wow, your as much of a hopeless romantic as me.. u have NO IDEA how big the smile on my face was with the key in the door line … amazing!! love this! please continue the story
Good chapter. What a wonderful Tina surprise Bette and now let see some loving coming. Alice is so funny. Post soon please, thanks!
knew you wouldn’t let us down. YES. Happy New Year to all , and as the others said, keep it coming, engagement, wedding, etc.
brill chapter! a perfect mix of funny and sweet.
hopelessly romantic.. LOL. i am one of them. this story is great..!
“It’s a Christmas Miracle!” Great line Alice – and a Happy New Year to everyone!
Yeah I agree with Amanda. No need to end this at all. After all, there’s still an engagement, wedding, honeymoon, etc. to cover. ;)
yes i love alice… and it was a christmas miracle… beautiful… and that is where tina belongs… forever… love this s tory… and just because christmas is over… no need to end this beautiful story… just make it a sequel… and bring on the loving… HAPPY NEW YEAR…
Very sweet.
I couldn’t agree more with AmandaMG and Lamentamini….do a sequel…..we want to read about how their relationship grows and you’ve to be there to cover B’s proposal and B&T’s wedding, honeymoon, kids an so on :o)) LOL…..By the way I loved the line “Taking care of you is tiring. I could’ve used a little help”….your Alice is so great :o)) Please keep’em coming
I love this, the best Christmas gift…Each other…
please keep on writing – I love your story!
You have got to love Alice…she may lack tact, but she’s got a lot of heart. That was a very lovely and romantic chapter. Thanks for the update. Please post soon.
Can’t wait for more!!!
Awesome. Looking forward to more.
My favorite line: “Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” That was priceless! Thanks for making me laugh!
Happy New Year one and all another fantastic chapter
Great update love the story now on with the NC-17.. lol.
You can take us to Easter, that was so beautiful thankks
hi there- i just came across your writing yesterday and went back and read all that you’ve posted. just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed it and how much i wish that you continue. you are awful good at this and hope that you keep on with it. thanks!