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Our first Christmas…Chapter 6
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“No actually, can’t say that I do.” I don’t mean it to sound bitchy, but things like that sting sometimes.
“God Bette, I’m sorry. I wasn’t thinking.”
“
She smiles at me sadly and we fall into a little silence. She looks at me as if she wants to ask a question, but shakes her head a looks back down.
“What?”
“Nothing, I didn’t say anything.”
“I know you want to ask me something, go ahead.”
She looks at me for a second, gauging to see if it’s safe to proceed. “Okay, don’t bite my head off or anything”
“Not a good way to open a conversation Al.”
“It’s just that, you seemed so worried about Tina leaving for the holidays. That’s so not like you.”
I sigh heavily while digesting what she’s just said. “That’s not a question” I reply just to buy myself sometime to process things.
“Whatever Miss Details. Okay, here’s my question. What the hell is up with you?”
I laugh at how blunt she it. I’ve never met someone with as little tact as
“I wish I knew really. I’ve just never felt this way about anyone before. It.well it scares me.” I know I’m going to regret telling this to
“What are you scared of?”
“I don’t know, of her getting bored with me and moving on. Of her figuring out she doesn’t want to be with a woman and going back to someone like Eric. Of letting her see how royally fucked up I am and her deciding it’s too much shit to deal with. And ever other stupid fleeting thought that runs through my head all the time. I know it’s stupid and that she loves me, but I’ve only loved one other person as much as I’ve loved her and that didn’t end so well.”
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and i love you…this is so great, i knew tina will come home as soon as you mentioned hopeless romantic…so am i, and this chapter was indeed absolutely romantic and perfect…i demand sequel
Yeah, what the hell, go for it.
Al is so adorable. A friend in need is a friend indeed. I think all TiBetters are hopelessly romantic. LOL
AND THAT WAS EXACTLY HOW I WANTED THIS STORY TO GO!!have to admit i had a feeling that you would take the very romantic route and that Tina would either not get on that plane or turn up on the day and you have done the story justice gotta love ya for it,infact im off to read it again its not just the NC17s i love i love the sappy stuff just as much!!!lol lookin forward to more just coz the hols are over doesnt mean this has to end yet!!!lol
“Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” Aww you’ve got the witty Alice and romantic B&T it’s a winning combo.
heehee… that was great!!! :)
wow, your as much of a hopeless romantic as me.. u have NO IDEA how big the smile on my face was with the key in the door line … amazing!! love this! please continue the story
Good chapter. What a wonderful Tina surprise Bette and now let see some loving coming. Alice is so funny. Post soon please, thanks!
knew you wouldn’t let us down. YES. Happy New Year to all , and as the others said, keep it coming, engagement, wedding, etc.
brill chapter! a perfect mix of funny and sweet.
hopelessly romantic.. LOL. i am one of them. this story is great..!
“It’s a Christmas Miracle!” Great line Alice – and a Happy New Year to everyone!
Yeah I agree with Amanda. No need to end this at all. After all, there’s still an engagement, wedding, honeymoon, etc. to cover. ;)
yes i love alice… and it was a christmas miracle… beautiful… and that is where tina belongs… forever… love this s tory… and just because christmas is over… no need to end this beautiful story… just make it a sequel… and bring on the loving… HAPPY NEW YEAR…
Very sweet.
I couldn’t agree more with AmandaMG and Lamentamini….do a sequel…..we want to read about how their relationship grows and you’ve to be there to cover B’s proposal and B&T’s wedding, honeymoon, kids an so on :o)) LOL…..By the way I loved the line “Taking care of you is tiring. I could’ve used a little help”….your Alice is so great :o)) Please keep’em coming
I love this, the best Christmas gift…Each other…
please keep on writing – I love your story!
You have got to love Alice…she may lack tact, but she’s got a lot of heart. That was a very lovely and romantic chapter. Thanks for the update. Please post soon.
Can’t wait for more!!!
Awesome. Looking forward to more.
My favorite line: “Well, I’m off for another round of ‘how fat is my ass’ with my mother, wish me luck.” That was priceless! Thanks for making me laugh!
Happy New Year one and all another fantastic chapter
Great update love the story now on with the NC-17.. lol.
You can take us to Easter, that was so beautiful thankks
hi there- i just came across your writing yesterday and went back and read all that you’ve posted. just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed it and how much i wish that you continue. you are awful good at this and hope that you keep on with it. thanks!