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    Out of Closet (TiBette time-travel romance), Ch. 68, Finale part 4C: Chapter: Last curtain – The End is Here, finally.

    Story written on January 17, 2022 by BetteAndTinaForever.
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    Place: Los Angeles, CA: 11000 Wilshire Blvd #1700, the FBI office Time: Monday, October 16, 2006 (cont.) They put Alice in the same interrogation room but Agent McKinnon got a message on her phone, frowned and walked out right away. She was gone for over ten minutes and Agent Johnson was getting impatient. He kept

    Place: Los Angeles, CA: 11000 Wilshire Blvd #1700, the FBI office

    Time: Monday, October 16, 2006 (cont.)

    They put Alice in the same interrogation room but Agent McKinnon got a message on her phone, frowned and walked out right away. She was gone for over ten minutes and Agent Johnson was getting impatient. He kept drumming his fingers on the table, constantly glancing at the door. Finally, he got up and moved near the door so he could eavesdrop. Judging by the scowl on his face he was not very successful.

    Alice leaned back on her chair and began whistling quietly to keep her nerves showing. Finally, Agent McKinnon came back in with a stupefied expression on her face. She dropped a folder on top of the table and motioned for the other agent to come closer. They huddled in the corner, whispering. Alice ears perked up as she tried to listen. Agent McKinnon face was flashed with emotions that Alice couldn’t identify. It looked like a mix of anger, disbelief and wonderment.

    Alice shifted in her char so she could lean closer to be able to hear anything when her gaze fell on the piece of paper sticking out of the folder that Agent McKinnon left on the table. Name Porter caught her attention. Alice quickly glanced at the agents who were deep in the conversation and appeared to pay no attention to her. She got up and approached them, keeping the folder hidden behind her back.

    “I’m sorry to interrupt but I do have an important assignment and deadline is approaching. Do y’all have any questions for me or should I just go?”

    Both agents looked at her as if she just appeared out of a thin air. “Please sit down, Miss Pieszecki,” Agent McKinnon said. Alice turned around and bumped the table, making the folder fall to the floor.

    “Oh geez, I’m sorry. How clumsy of me,” she knelt down and began picking up papers from the floor. They scattered all over but she managed to keep an eye on the one document she noticed earlier. She quickly grabbed it, crumbled it in her and stashed in her pocket.

    Agent Johnson took the folder out of her hands and placed it back on the table, “Sit down.”

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    1. Thank you for the chapter!

      But ohhh – no. I’m hopping Candace grabbing not Bette’s hand, but Helena’s. Both brunettes, both in dark cloaks. It could be, isn’t it?

      Please post soon, we need epilogue ASAP! :)

    3. Is this really the end? Not exactly a happily ever after ending in my opinion….

      I think Alice’s explanation to the FBI is perfectly feasible. I would think that the FBI would have not put their criminal investigators on a case of claimed time travel but a special division who dealt with phenomena which were rumored to exist for which was not generally accept principles of nature – such as flying sauces, Big Foot, time travel, and aliens, etc. I would expect that the FBI would treat people like Helena and the Professor as slightly off their rocker…but this is fiction.

      Now… I’m not sure that Bette and Tina have much control on where this portal takes them, but I assume its a single opening and a single exit. And reading about life in the 19th century and living it are two different things. Living in a community without electricity, indoor pluming, shoes designed to be worn on a left or right foot, no communication devices, and a life where the vast majority of time is spent acquiring money or food. A society where women are not just 2nd class citizens but for the most house holds domestic servants to men. A society in which homosexual attraction has to be hidden and never acknowledged even to the closest family member. And of course, the skill set need by Bette and Tina to survive? Being odd is not going to be their only problem. I’m not sure when you look at how hard that life would be, that running from the likes of Helena, Candace and the Professor is not a much better option.

      Your story is unique and has been very entertaining. I for one have found the concept of time travel to be fascinating. But the thought of going to a time that was not my own and be trapped indefinitely would be terrifying. Bette finding Tina was her saving grace and was the only way she could truly survive the experience. But even this was not permenant, Bette had some ability to go back and then return. But my understanding is that the portal closes permanently with this last trip. At least that is what the Professor is predicting based on some science principles which have yet to be tested much less proven.

      I know you have spent years writing this. I do appreciate it. I do hope that you do an epilogue and not leave us with a cliffhanger as to what actually happened. Our girls deserve a happy, peaceful and normal life.

      Thanks for the story…

      • Thank you for the insightful comment. Yes, the last chapter was not the actual finale, that’s why the epilogue is coming up. Apart from being a teaser (a little bit ;) ) I also wanted to stay true to my story (the way some of my chapters were structured in the past.) Thank you for reading, i really appreciate it

      • Haha, you put that idea into my head when you suggested 50 parts of the finale. Alas, i can only manage 4. The epilogue is coming and that will a final end to the story. I really appreciate your comments. Honestly, one of the earlier comments you made (maybe 10-15 chapters ago (which probably puts it 5 years ago LOL), is one of the reasons that made me going…the other reason that i’m a stubborn foreigner that wouldn’t just never give up…thank you

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