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    Out of Control Chapter 5

    Shortly after the departure of Kit and Shane Alice told Dana she was going back down to Tina. With a kiss good-bye Alice walked in the direction the other two had taken.

    Jenny nodded without saying anything for a couple of seconds then look at Dana, “you know she and I spoke. She’s been having a difficult time with everything that happened. She’s hurt almost as much as everyone else but she’s alone. She didn’t actually tell me this but you could see it on her face and hear it in her voice. She needed her friends but she was abandoned”, Dana started to speak but Jenny stopped her from speaking holding her hand up then continued, “you guys didn’t do it on purpose. She pushed you away and encouraged you to be with and help Tina. She didn’t think she deserved any of you. I watched her sitting by the pool drinking. I’d go out there to make she was alright but she made it clear she didn’t want to talk. I was new there but she’d allow me stay just to have someone there.”

    Dana looked at Jenny shaking her head, “we are such *****, aren’t we?”

    When Kit and Shane reached the elevators Shane turned to Kit, “uh, Kit there’s something I need to do but I need to be alone for a few minutes. Can I meet you outside?”

    “Oh, Baby, take all the time you need. I invited myself anyway. I’ll be out front.”

    “Thanks, I’ll meet you out there”, with that statement from Shane, Kit took the elevator down. The elevator rang indicting the ground level. As soon as Kit stepped outside she breathed deeply and immediately felt better. It might have been a slight case of claustrophobia or a big case of stir crazy. She wanted to talk to someone. Normally, that would have been her baby sister butKit shook that thought away vigorously. She looked down at her phone then stated dialing. The line was answered after four rings with a smooth, “hello.” Kit hesitate for a moment then said, “Ivan”

    Shane had held back to take the elevator to the fourth floor. When the doors opened Shane stepped out of the elevator looking left the right searching the signs pointing this way and that. She spotted what she was looking for then began walking. There was a left then a right before Shane hesitated in front of a door. She took a deep breath then slowly opened the door. The room was dimly lit. She walked to the front of the room. She put her hands together as knelt down with her head bowed down and prayed.  

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    1. HI There… you know i found your story at waor last night… and i can’t comment from work.. but let me tell you i am enjoying it.. and so happy to see another post…,so reading on…see you on the flip side

    2. WOW. Shane is the one that I least expected to be in the Chapel. Bless him. Like how you but Bette at the center of their life and with her the drifted apart, thanks

    3. sometimes tragedy join people that didnt know they need to be together and in this case will help B&T to give another chance to each other ..i hope Bette will be ok without any sequela..cant wait for more thanks :o)

    4. i’ve just read this chapter and its great — i love how you get the group dynamics so spot on. its going great — i’m off now to read the rest of your stuff.

    5. that’s the best thing to do in a case like this Shane, hopefully your prayers will be answered and Bette will return to you guys, we can all only hope

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