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    Over me: chapter 6

     

    I exhaled. "That’s not what I want."

     

    "Then, please, Dane…" Her voice grew husky. "If you want us to try again… talk to her.”

     

    I paused, suddenly sure that I did want that, more than anything I had wanted before.

     

    “I will. I promise.”

     

    I hung up feeling even more exhausted than before. I went back inside, put some coffee on and started making breakfast. The thought of eating made me feel sick but I knew I had to if I was going to survive the day. I was cutting up a banana when Lara came into the kitchen. The dark circles under her eyes were a mirror of my own.

     

    "I’m making breakfast." I started, unnecessarily, then stopped and put down the knife. Lara wasn’t looking at me; she just reached past me for coffee then sat gripping the mug like it might vanish at any moment. I turned my attention to her, breakfast forgotten now.

     

    "Lar… we need to talk."

     

    Her eyes darted up to meet mine, and in them I saw a mixture of fear and relief. I didn’t want to imagine what my eyes were revealing to her.

     

    I moved to sit by her, watching the swirls of steam from the coffee rising up between us.

     

    "None of this is your fault. I want you to know that." I began, falteringly. I saw her swallow and then jut her chin out as if about to take a blow.

     

    "If that’s supposed to make me feel better, Dana…"

     

    I looked at my hands, fiddled with a bracelet on my wrist and then I started to speak, trying to let the words flow:

     

    "I don’t know how it happened, Lar. It was like being in a dream I couldn’t control. There’s something between us; it’s so strong… Al… Alice and me; I wish I could explain it."

     

    Her look and the trembling of her lip told me I had better try. Are you happy now, Dana? I thought bitterly. "I’m listening." She said, more firmly than I imagined she would.

     

    "I love you, Lar. I do."

     

    "But?-" She interjected, her tone cutting, and her eyes bright with tears or anger I wasn’t sure.

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    Comments

    1. OMG what a cliffhanger, I may have said it before but I’ll say it again just so you know, I love this story! I think it’s great you’ve written it from Dana’s POV, and you write her and all the other characters so well, it’s bloody brilliant! Please don’t let Alice be hurt too badly or at all if you can help it *sniffs* Dana will take care of Alice and especially take care of Ethan if he has done anything stupid. PPS xx

    2. I hate to be rude, but have you borrowed these characters from LA Laydees? What a feeling! bein’s believin’I can’t have it all, now I’m dancin’ for my life Take your passion, and make it happen Pictures come alive, you can dance right through your life – that is what I would have said to Zippie before he left bungle for george. Will you be my wifffe? Where’s my story!!!

    3. I actually feel bad for Lara, but the force – it was too strong. I hope Ethan didn’t hurt Alice. Is the apartment Dana’s condo? If so, will Lara be leaving soon? Please update soon!

    4. excellent update! I still like that Lara is not caving in to Dana’s poor behavior (but do feel bad for Lara) but I guess you can’t stop connections that are ‘meant to be’?

    5. I called it! At least I think I did…I really hope Alice just forgot to pay her landline bill because she uses her cell so much, though. This was great, even though you left us with a cliffhanger!

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