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Over me: Chapter 8
“You are so cute when you sulk…”
I tried to suppress a grin, but failed.
“Alright… But if this is my last day of slacking off you have to slack off with me.”
Al’s eyes lit up.
“Ok, cool!”
We decided to have lunch at a little café near the Planet and then catch a movie in town. It actually felt really good to be out with Al, holding hands in the sunshine. I kept sneaking little glances at her, just enjoying watching her and letting it sink in that we were together again. It was fun. Sadly, in my experience nothing golden can last and so it was that day. We’d finished up at ‘La Petite Brassiere’ and were on our way to my car on course for the movie (‘The Grudge 2’: yep, Al’s choice) at 3pm. I reached into my bag for my keys and did the familiar grope around as I did, checking everything was where it should be. It wasn’t.
“Shit!”
Al frowned.
“What?”
“My cell! I think I left it on our table at the café.”
She checked her watch.
“Well if you run back now we should still make it…”
I nodded and took off, leaving Alice to find the car.
I made it back to the café in double quick time. The cell wasn’t where I thought I’d left it but after a panicked conversation with a waitress it turned out someone had handed it in… crisis averted. Then as I walked past the Planet there she was. Almost as if she was waiting for me.
“Lara!” I looked down. “Hi…”
She pushed off from the wall.
“Dana.”
I shifted awkwardly on the spot, not knowing what to say.
“How-“
“Don’t.”
I saw her eyes were red-rimmed.
“Don’t ask me how I am.”
I cleared my throat. “Sorry.”
She licked her lips, shadows from the Planet’s awing playing over her features. A beat, then as if she couldn’t help herself:
“I saw you two. You looked like you were having fun.” Each word was as sharp as an icicle.
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(29 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
:O You can’t leave it there!! I mean I know you were trying to work us up just like they were and it worked but I don’t want to wait like Al and Dana did! :( Man you’re the tease here not Alice! Awesome post, this story is so fantastically brilliant I love the way you write, it truly is amazing hun. So now you gotta PPS! xx
De_Leish_ous was so right. I wonder what exactly is so damaging about the pictures. I realize that seeing the pictures hurt Lara, but Al’s reaction when he took the pictures also seemed extra strong.
WOW!!! that’s all i can say!! thank you for coming back bc i love this story!! but thats not right for you to just stop the story right there!!! it was getting good!!!! PPS!!!
Awwww…come on! that was really mean. lol. This is awesome! PPS
This is the very 1st Alice/Dana fic I have read and I love it I just read all 8 chapters and I can’t wait for more