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Over me: Chapter 8
“Al!” I shouted. “Alice!”
She continued to run, dodging past pedestrians and around café tables. I pounded the pavement, increasing my pace.
“Al! Please! It’s not what you think!”
I finally caught up with her and grabbed hold of her shoulder. She tried to pull away from me but I held on. She turned and we were face to face. Angry tears were rolling down her cheeks, and where her face had been white it was now crimson.
“Fuck off, Dana!”
“Don’t say that! She was just there, Al, it wasn’t planned!”
“Nothing ever is with you, is it?!” She spat, and tried once more to shake off my hand. “Let go!”
“No! I need to explain!”
She screwed up her face. “I’m tired of listening, Dana. You’re obviously incapable of committing to me!” She finally managed to wrench her arm away, and went to walk away.
“Look!” I thrust the envelope at her. She paused, and without looking, hissed:
“What is it?!”
I pulled out the photos and held them in front of her.
“Ethan sent these to Lara. That’s what she wanted to talk to me about.”
Alice’s mouth opened.
“Oh.”
She put her hands on her hips and then by her side.
“You were –“Her forehead crinkled. “You were touching her.”
I threw my hands up, feeling anger bubbling inside me. “She was upset! How would you feel if you got those through the post?!”
Alice’s jaw jutted forward.
“Don’t blame me for this!”
I grabbed the photos and put them away.
“I’m not blaming you; I just thought you might have trusted me a little more…” I trailed off.
Alice cocked her head.
“Trust you?” She gave a bitter laugh. “Forgive me if I have trouble with that concept!”
Her anger fuelled my own.
“Jesus, Al! I left Lara for you. I want to be with you now!”
She bit her lip and said sarcastically, “Oh, I’m sorry, you’re sure now. That’s ok then!”
I rolled my eyes in frustration, at the same time noticing we had drawn quite a bit of attention with our display.
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(29 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
:O You can’t leave it there!! I mean I know you were trying to work us up just like they were and it worked but I don’t want to wait like Al and Dana did! :( Man you’re the tease here not Alice! Awesome post, this story is so fantastically brilliant I love the way you write, it truly is amazing hun. So now you gotta PPS! xx
De_Leish_ous was so right. I wonder what exactly is so damaging about the pictures. I realize that seeing the pictures hurt Lara, but Al’s reaction when he took the pictures also seemed extra strong.
WOW!!! that’s all i can say!! thank you for coming back bc i love this story!! but thats not right for you to just stop the story right there!!! it was getting good!!!! PPS!!!
Awwww…come on! that was really mean. lol. This is awesome! PPS
This is the very 1st Alice/Dana fic I have read and I love it I just read all 8 chapters and I can’t wait for more