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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2

    Bette loosened her grasp on her own hand as she, for the second time that day, started unfastening the buttons on Tinas top. This time there would be no interruptions. Tina rested her hands on Bettes forearms as she moved her way up, finally ending by tossing the blouse on the chair by the bed. Tina turned to face her and placed her hands on Bettes hips, pulling her closer.

    I really wanted you that nightI couldnt believe you were being so polite. It just made me want you more They were face to face as they spoke of their mutual desire. Bette reached around to remove Tinas bra and let it slip off her body to rest on the floor between them. Bette then leaned in to kiss her, but just as their lips were about to make contact, Tina pulled her head back and smiled mischievously.

    Youre in a teasing mood, are you? Bette asked as she lightly ran her fingertips up and down Tinas back. She could feel Tina shiver underneath her feather light touch. It only made her look forward to feeling the shiver run through her body when she brought Tina to the peak of sexual ecstasy. Bette continued, Im going to make love to you like I wanted to on that first dateslowly, repeatedly and all night long She placed her hand behind Tinas head and drew her face in to meet her own. Their lips were so close they were almost touching. Bette looked intently into Tinas eyes as she moved closer and took her bottom lip between her teeth, pinching the soft pink flesh, and tasting the heat of her lovers mouth. Tina felt herself tingle as the contact was finally consummated.

    She was done teasing. She reached for the bottom hem of Bettes top and practically tore it from her body, so intense was her desire. They were both nude from the waist up, hungrily kissing each other as they fumbled with their jeans, trying desperately to remove them quickly, knowing the sooner they could remove the offending garments, the more quickly satisfaction could be achieved. Bette leaned Tina back onto the bed and they both moved under the sheet. As they shifted their bodies to a comfortable position, Tina reached forward and ran her hand up Bettes inner thigh and over her wetness. She then brought her hand to her mouth and licked the moisture from her fingertips as her eyes rolled back and a sigh escaped her.

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    Comments

    1. I think you copped out at the last.
      This is very, very good in its immediacy and impact.
      I rarely give a directive, but I think you should go back and extrapolate – go further with the details. Don’t be afraid!
      Here’s a ‘5’ even if you should decide not to. But you could make a good chapter even better.
      Thanks.

    2. Have to agree with Techgal here – bit of a cop out. Why? You might not have written a love scene before but this was very good. Go for a re-write! I know what you mean about villans. You have to have the lows to get the highs.

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