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Paradise Found-Chapter 20
“Oh god baby…..give it to me hard….I need it.” Tina is rocking her hips quickly up and down…trying to swallow Bette’s fingers deep inside herself. Bette looks up to see Tina’s breasts bouncing as she holds onto the head board and rides Bette’s fingers faster.
Tina begins chanting, “Fuck fuck fuck fuck…..fuck me hard….I’m so close.” Tina is riding Bette harder and faster. Then suddenly stops. She throws her head back and screams the silent scream of ecstasy. A few seconds later, she falls forward and lies on top of Bette….trying to get her breath back, she snuggles up into Bette.
“I love you so much, Tina. I couldn’t be happier. Thank you for our children. I look at them and all I can see is you. Zach has your chin….and Angie has your smile. They are perfect, baby…just like you.”
Before Tina can speak, they hear banging at the front door.
“Get out of bed and open the door, Porter! You have children now! Stop pawing at Tina and let her rest for pete’s sake!”
“Shit! What the fuck is she doing here!” Bette grabs a robe and heads for the door to shut Alice up. She still has a slight limp from her injuries….but the doctors are confident that with continued physical therapy she’ll be walking normally again soon.
Bette opens the door to find Dana and Shane staring at Alice and telling her to shut up.
“I swear, Alice…….why am I still friends with you! Do we really have to listen to your big ass mouth this early in the morning? Dana, get your woman under control or I’m going to break her fingers.”
Dana punches Alice in the arm. “If she keeps this up, she won’t need them anyway!”
The 3 friends walk into the house, just in time to hear Angelica and Zachary break out into ‘song’.
Bette glares at Alice and walks out of the room. She meets Tina in the hallway and they enter the nursery together. Tina kisses her on the cheek then goes to Angelica’s crib and begins changing her diaper.
“I’ve got dibs on Angie.” She looked at Zach then back at Bette and winked, “Be sure to watch out for the stream!”
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(19 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
Awesome. Enjoyed every chapter – thank you…..and PPS!
A wonderful ending this incredible story. Glad that the family is happy and safe.
Fantastic!! Hate to see it end but all good things must come to an end. So glad that all three of them received long prison sentences, too bad they’re not dead. Great story and I enjoyed every minute of it. Sam is awesome, maybe you will give us another story that features her prominently. Thanks so much for shsring.
Wonderful. Thank you so much. I have enjoyed reading every chapter of this story. Thank you for sharing. You are one of my fav writers.
Very , Very nice now off toread the whole story again, sorry I haven’t commented but this was a great story to read keep up the great work and thanks.
Thanks for this wonderful story Vegas513! Hope you have more stories for us ;) PPS
Yes, Her paradise is found for ever! Thanks for this great story. I wouldn’t mind a sequel but thank you anyway.
Absolutely fantastic! Thank you for this story!
Hey Vegas, That was just amazing. I love how you show all the love and connection between Bette and Tina.Yes, they have had their ups and downs however they are a partnership and a family throughout everything.I have love every word.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
This was a great story,and im so sad that it has ended, but I hope that you have more storys for us.Thank you.
I loved this story. Maybe it could continue? You have writing talent. You write wonderful, detailed NC-17s which are difficult to write w/o appearing lurid or juvenile.
Thank you for this story. It was a fun ride! I hope you can come up with a new one for us in the future.
well that was a good ole story there, kinda felt like a movie