Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
Paradise Found-Chapter 20
************************************
“So do we know if Denbo is going to take a plea or not?” Alice is on the floor making faces at Angie and Zach as they swing and play….Angie in the bouncer seat and Zach in the swing. Their laughs and giggles fill the child-proofed family room.
A lot has happened in 6 months. Bette had to spend the week after the babies were born in the hospital. Tina and the children just moved floors and took up residence with Bette until she could come home. William, Maxine, and Melvin huddled together and decided that more security was in order for their childrens’ home and talked with Bette and Tina about installing some safeguards. When the new family arrived home, Kennard Incorporated had installed a state of the art security system…..complete with alarms, outside motion detectors and lights, and cameras discreetly placed around the home. And for good measure, they surrounded the pool with a beautiful wrought iron fence.
Denbo was in custody and had been denied bail for 6 months. They all hoped that the experience in jail was draining enough for her that it would push into a plea. Everybody just wanted the entire ordeal to end.
Sam leaned back in response to Alice’s question. “The freak has been ‘shrunk’ by 3 psychiatrists already. She thinks she can get ‘treatment’ instead of jail time. She is still deluding herself but that doesn’t mean she’s the legal definition of crazy.”
Bette walks in with a basket of baby clothes, towels, and diapers and places them on them on the table in front of her friends, “Here…you play with my kids, you help clean up after my kids.”
Alice makes a face and begins to fold clothes as Bette continues, “Yes, but with Amy Sedekis in jail for 10-20 years and LeBurn Johns in for 20-30, she won’t be able to hold out for much longer. I can’t believe that idiot tried to return the car after having his ‘chop shop’ buddies replaced the front fender and slapped paint on it. It was as good as a confession. Amy’s testimony was just icing on the cake.”
The phone rings and Bette watches as Tina answers it in the kitchen. She talks for a few minutes then waves Bette to the phone.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(19 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
Awesome. Enjoyed every chapter – thank you…..and PPS!
A wonderful ending this incredible story. Glad that the family is happy and safe.
Fantastic!! Hate to see it end but all good things must come to an end. So glad that all three of them received long prison sentences, too bad they’re not dead. Great story and I enjoyed every minute of it. Sam is awesome, maybe you will give us another story that features her prominently. Thanks so much for shsring.
Wonderful. Thank you so much. I have enjoyed reading every chapter of this story. Thank you for sharing. You are one of my fav writers.
Very , Very nice now off toread the whole story again, sorry I haven’t commented but this was a great story to read keep up the great work and thanks.
Thanks for this wonderful story Vegas513! Hope you have more stories for us ;) PPS
Yes, Her paradise is found for ever! Thanks for this great story. I wouldn’t mind a sequel but thank you anyway.
Absolutely fantastic! Thank you for this story!
Hey Vegas, That was just amazing. I love how you show all the love and connection between Bette and Tina.Yes, they have had their ups and downs however they are a partnership and a family throughout everything.I have love every word.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
This was a great story,and im so sad that it has ended, but I hope that you have more storys for us.Thank you.
I loved this story. Maybe it could continue? You have writing talent. You write wonderful, detailed NC-17s which are difficult to write w/o appearing lurid or juvenile.
Thank you for this story. It was a fun ride! I hope you can come up with a new one for us in the future.
well that was a good ole story there, kinda felt like a movie