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Part 14: The Doubts (Alice & Dana)
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A month has past…
At The Planet…
Shane, Carmen, Alice and Dana are talking, drinking coffee. Bette and Tina entered with Tina pushing a pram with Angelica in it. They sat down next to them.
Bette: Hey!
Shane: Hi Bette, Hi Tina.
Carmen: HI!!
Alice: Hey you guys.
Dana: Long time no see.
Tina: Hi.
Carmen: How’s Angelica?
Dana: Yeah how is she?
Tina: She’s fine thanks, she’s sleeping right now.
Bette: So…I see everything’s in place. (cocking her head to Alice and Dana)
Tina: I’m glad two of you are back together. Hmm?
Alice and Dana looked at eachother.
Alice: (smiling) Oh no..we’re not.
Dana looking a little dissapointed.
Tina: Oh I see.
Bette: Ooh..sorry.
Shane: They’re “cooling-off”.
Bette: Oh.
Dana: Alice said we need more time.
Carmen: Like a month?
Alice: Yeah…okay..I’m going to the bathroom.
Alice stood up and walked towards the bathroom.
Dana looked down at her coffee and sighed.
Tina: How long has it been?
Dana: (a little sad) I don’t know but…long.
Shane: You should go talk to her.
Bette: Alice is just being stubborn…
Carmen: I think she’s still blaming herself for what happened.
Shane elbowed Carmen.
Bette & Tina: What happened?
Carmen: I mean what happened in uum…
Bette: Dana said Alice has a girlfriend.
Shane: Yeah about that.
Tina: Are they still together?
Shane: No…
Tina: So then..?
Dana: Okay you know what? (standing up) I’m gonna talk to her right now.
Shane: Yeah you should.
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Dana went and walked in the bathroom. Alice was there washing her hands.
Dana: Alice…we need to talk.
Alice: Look I said we need more time, okay?
Dana: No Alice. YOU need more time. I’m ready, your not. What’s the problem?
Alice: I know, it’s been long but I’m not ready yet. I’m sorry..
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Back outside…
Bette: I think it’s time those two got back together.
Shane: I know.
Tina: What do you have in mind?
Bette: I don’t know but we have to try.
Carmen: I know it’s like Alice is avoiding Dana.
Shane: She’s still blaming herself..
Carmen: Or I think some of Shane’s no commitment thing rubbed off on her.
Shane: What? Shut up.
Carmen, Bette and Tina laughing.
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Bathroom…
Dana: I understand lots of things happened but it’s over now.
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this is just getting better and better but I do hope that they get back together and I hope the rest of the gang can get them to know that they shold be together because they love each other please post soon
damn, post soon.
Dana was really bad to Alice earlier in the story. I don’t mind that Alice is having trouble getting back with her.
ok, so i have to agree with ackemat. dana was very f*cked up earlier in this story… if alice now feels that she needs some time, she deserves it. its not like she is out dating and shagging other girls… everyone knows that she will go back to dana. i don’t like the idea of dana trying to force the woman she supposedly loves, to sort out her issues just because she is ready to get back together… and that crap that she said at the end about leaving lara for alice, that is just irrelevant.
i support the idea of shane. carmen, and the rest of the gang trying to help alice through her issues first… and then alice going to dana and working it out… not because she is pushed, but because she is ready.
ok, thats about it… i hope it didn’t sound like i was attacking your writing or anything, i am enjoying this fic very much. please continue