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Part 14: The Doubts (Alice & Dana)
Alice: I know..but..
Dana: But what? How long are you planning to stay away from me?
Alice: I’m not staying away from you. I love you.
Dana: You that but you don’t mean it!
Alice: I’m sorry, Dana. Not now.
Alice walked out. Dana was standing there looking down. She doesn’t undertand why Alice is doing this to her.
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Alice’s house…
Dana knocked on the door…Alice opened it and looked at her.
Alice: Dana..
Dana: …Can I..come in?
Alice opened it more and let Dana come in. Dana sat at the end of the couch, Alice sat on the other end.
Silence…
Alice: Yeah so..
Dana: Can you tell me what’s wrong?
Alice: Nothing..I told you nothing’s wrong.
Dana: Well there seems to be…
Alice: I know it’s been ages but I just think that..
Dana: That what?
Alice: Like I’m a danger hazard you know? I nearly..I nearly got you killed.
Dana: (coming closer) But you didn’t. You gotta trust me, would I be here if I’m dead?
Alice looked at her.
Dana: Hmm? Well?
Alice: …..No…
Dana: Alice I love you very, very much.
Alice: I..I love you..too.
Dana held her hand and smiled. Alice looked at her hand holding hers. She couldn’t take it. It was too overwhelming for her. Her heart started to beat more faster. She quickly took her hand away from Dana’s and stood up going to the kitchen.
Alice: I’m sorry I can’t.
Dana was dissapointed, what’s wrong with Alice? What has she done? Dana stood up and followed her.
Dana: You can’t what? You can’t be with me? You can’t..you can’t what?!!
Alice: I don’t know, I don’t want to hurt you again.
Dana: (angrily) It’s like I don’t know you anymore. Can you please talk to me?
Alice just stood there back turned. Dana was waiting for an answer, she couldn’t take it anymore and left. She didn’t want to say anything bad. She stopped at the front door and turned back and walked to the kitchen again. Alice was still standing there.
Dana: Just to remind you..I left Lara just for you..just for YOU. I thought when I got back here, I thought I could make it up to you, I thought..I thought you loved me.
Dana looked at Alice waiting for her to say something. But Alice remained there motionless.
Dana: Why do I even bother?
Dana left. Alice realised what she’s doing and turned around but Dana was gone.
Alice: *****! What the *****’s wrong with you?
Dana got in her car and started it. She wind down the window and looked at Alice’s door. She was expecting for her to come rushing out saying sorry but nothing. She started crying and drove off.
(to be continued)
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this is just getting better and better but I do hope that they get back together and I hope the rest of the gang can get them to know that they shold be together because they love each other please post soon
damn, post soon.
Dana was really bad to Alice earlier in the story. I don’t mind that Alice is having trouble getting back with her.
ok, so i have to agree with ackemat. dana was very f*cked up earlier in this story… if alice now feels that she needs some time, she deserves it. its not like she is out dating and shagging other girls… everyone knows that she will go back to dana. i don’t like the idea of dana trying to force the woman she supposedly loves, to sort out her issues just because she is ready to get back together… and that crap that she said at the end about leaving lara for alice, that is just irrelevant.
i support the idea of shane. carmen, and the rest of the gang trying to help alice through her issues first… and then alice going to dana and working it out… not because she is pushed, but because she is ready.
ok, thats about it… i hope it didn’t sound like i was attacking your writing or anything, i am enjoying this fic very much. please continue