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Past Inside Present – Chapter 9
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When I came it was silently. I got up and walked off to the bathroom leaving Lara just staring and burning a hole in the back of my head. I knew I was being a jerk but had no form of communicating how I felt. How could I tell her that through this shitty experience I had begun to learn that I wasn’t in love with her anymore? That I felt she needed me more than I needed her? That she was never going to be enough? That no matter how hard we had tried I had never gotten over Alice and probably never would? So many unanswered questions incorporated themselves into my conscious as I shut the bathroom door and leant my forehead against it. Moments later I heard a tapping from the other side. I told her I’d be a minute but she relentlessly kept knocking. I flung open the door in an unprecedented and uncalled for rage and shouted at her. I think it was along of the lines of can’t you just stay out of my life. I still hate myself for saying that to her, no matter how bad I felt, it gave me no right to talk to her that way and she knew it. She yelled back at me that she had had enough of my attitude and was just trying to help, I didn’t have any right to take it out on her and that she wouldn’t be seeing me until I had sorted some shit out. She was fully justified and the determination in her eyes only emphasised her point. I softened my features and tried to apologise but she stormed off to her bedroom and I was left in the doorway to think about which woman in my life needed me more.
I had just come back from dinner with Lara, again. It had been the first time I’d seen her since our kiss and I was nervous as hell, nervous because I wasn’t sure at that moment I’d be able to hold myself back if it were to happen again. My relationship was all but over and the prospects of starting anew were beginning to sound more encouraging every minute. I hate admitting that. I hate how I discarded Al so quickly in my mind whenever Lara was around. The dinner had been great as usual, Lara always knew which restaurants to take me to for my special diet and she had picked another beautiful place hidden away from most. We had both taken cars there and were saying goodbye when she looked up at me shyly. It was that look. The one that contained an ever promise of hope, passion, electricity and lust and I was under her spell quicker than you can say: game set match. I reached for her and kissed her lips vigorously, too caught up in the moment to let anything else but her envelope my body and soul. Now was no time for pleasantries as I forced my tongue inside and she granted entry quickly as her hands reached for my hips and brought our bodies into full contact.
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=] So glad to see that you have gotten whatever muse it was back and started posting again…Excellent update and a very hopefully and CLIFFHANGErY? ending. Thanks so much
wow… love it… but im really on a mixed now… i pity lara but i hate ha!!! hope alice wakes up soon PPS
wow… love it… but im really on a mixed now… i pity lara but i hate ha!!! hope alice wakes up soon PPS
Another incredibly crafted chapter, De_leish_ous! The interactions between Dana and Lara seem so realistic. I actually do feel a teeny bit bad for Lara – Dana was never good at communicating her feelings. And you continue to write the deterioration of Dana and Alice’s relationship so well. It looks like there is a little bit of hope at the end of the chapter. I look forward to your next post. Thanks so much!!
Hey, sorry bout not commenting the last chapter i been reli busy :( lol. I LOVED this chapter just as much as the rest u always seem to get better with every chapter I have to echo wat Magoose says and WOOOO is Alice gunna wake?? Ohhh leaving us hanging like this how could u!?! lol :D x
I always feel bad for Alice whenever the breakup part comes into my mind. I think it couldn’t be worse when the one who you saw fetching the love of you love from your house after breaking up was her first girlfriend. It just hurt too much. Great update and I hope Alice will wake up soon. Thanks!
I always feel bad for Alice whenever the breakup part comes into my mind. I think it couldn’t be worse when the one who you saw fetching the love of your life from your house after breaking up was her first girlfriend. It just hurt too much. Great update and I hope Alice will wake up soon. Thanks!