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Peculiar Hesitation – Chapter 12
The athlete smiled at her girlfriend and held open her arms for a hug.
“Good. I’m working on a new serve.”
“Hey, did you want to go out to a club tonight?”
“Sure, if that’s what you want to do.” Dana responded warily. “What’s going on tonight?”
“I just heard it was supposed to be a good crowd.”
Dana was getting a little tired of the club scene from doing all the promotional appearances. She didn’t care much for mingling with strangers, but she figured it should be enjoyable having
“I’m not sure.”
“Which means Shane will be there.”
“Carmen’s DJing at Milk tonight. She’ll be there and not where we are.”
“Are you trying to get me alone,
“Is it working?”
Dana playfully nipped
Dana sat down on the bed, anxious of what
Dana nodded and reluctantly placed her hands on
“You’re very quiet.”
“Sorry.”
“Don’t apologize. It’s ok. I can make you feel good, baby.” She kissed Dana’s neck, making a trail of kisses from her neck to her collarbone. Dana perked up and reached for
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(33 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
Hey. This was really, really good. The dialogue is realistic and involving and the characters are well fleshed out. I’m really excited to read more!
Why I’m sensed this is gonna be a lot of drama. Post soon.
I can’t wait to see where you go with the story. I love Dana, but I’m not liking her very much at this moment.