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Peculiar Hesitation – Chapter 12
“But-”
Dana called
“I don’t know. I’m not going too dressy.”
Dana poked her head out the door, “Jeans or slacks?”
“Anything you want. Dane, you could go there in sweats and no one would care.”
Dana shot
“Well, then what are you wearing?”
“This.”
“Ooh, I like that. Put it on.”
“I’m getting to it. Patience, Dana-son.”
“But you know how much I love those shirts.” Dana smiled seductively.
“That I do. And you know how much I love those hot jeans of yours and how your ***** looks in them.”
Dana reddened and ducked her chin towards her chest. “Alright. I’ll wear jeans.”
“I have you whipped,”
A short while later, the two women entered the club.
Dana spun around and was face to face with Gabby, “Hi.” She found herself smiling and could have kicked herself for doing so, but she couldn’t help it.
Gabby grabbed Dana’s arm, “Come with me for a sec.”
“But
“
Dana waved her hand and shook her head.
“Suit yourself.” Gabby reclined in her seat. “Have you gotten the ***** back into your life yet?”
“That’s none of your business.”
Gabby took a long drag of the blunt. She exhaled, “Chronicgood stuff. You know
“I shouldn’t be here.”
“Then go.”
Dana opened the door and then closed it again. “Why are you doing this?”
“I act on three things-desire, instinct, and compulsion. Somehow, I feel compelled to do something. Although what it is, I don’t know.”
“Just because you helped me, doesn’t mean I owe you.”
“I didn’t ask for anything.”
Dana sighed, “Not yet.”
“What makes you think I want something from you?”
“Everyone does.”
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Hey. This was really, really good. The dialogue is realistic and involving and the characters are well fleshed out. I’m really excited to read more!
Why I’m sensed this is gonna be a lot of drama. Post soon.
I can’t wait to see where you go with the story. I love Dana, but I’m not liking her very much at this moment.