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Phoenix Rising (21)
“T…T…I want this …believe me I want…I want you so much…but …but…if we keep this…up I don’t know if I’ll be able to stop…you feel so fucking good…”
Tina gave a little laugh and brought Bette in for a hug.
“I guess that wasn’t what one might call slow….huh? How about we try and get up and eat something?”
Bette lifted herself up onto her arms and looked down at Tina.
“Tina, I’ll wait forever…but I really need you to know how much I want you…I don’t want you to have any doubt about that…but if you do…will you please tell me?”
Tina looked up at Bette and smiled.
“I do believe you have done a very thorough job of clarifying that particular issue, at least for the moment. C’mon help me up.
Bette hopped off of Tina and extended her hand to assist her and smiled.
“Your wish is my command…but we both know I can do a much more thorough job of showing you how much I want you.”
Tina, laughed at Bette’s playful remark and swatted her bottom.
“Down girl. Now let’s see what damage you’ve done to my kitchen. Any fires?”
“Cute Kinnard…very cute…um…it was only one…”
Tina, turned around and looked at Bette with an astonished look on her face.
“You are shittin’ me, right?”
Bette looked down and answered.
“About 5 months after you left…I wanted your lasagna…and I decided I could make it…T…I was drinking a lot back then and well I went to the market and bought all the ingredients and then I started cooking. I was doing okay, at first that is, and then I started searching through your recipes, it brought back so many memories…and I started drinking …Shit T…I was a fucking mess…I passed out with stuff all over the kitchen and everything on. Luckily I had brought my ass into the living room to look at your picture before I passed out. Kit came by to do her evening check and was able to put the fire out with the extinguisher and limited the damage. I had a contractor in and they were able to put it back the way it was, but shit T…It scared me…I guess that was the beginning of me pulling myself together.”
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(28 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
This story is such a breath of fresh air and I find myself hunting for an update. LOL I can’t wait for their first real date. PPS
D, you teased me. I thought for sure they were going to do the NASTY. LOL. But no, you pulled the reins in. I happy that they can talk, cry, and laugh together. The healing has begun. Great update.
:) This chapter made me happy. Heck, DnA, all of your chapters make me happy, even through the hard parts –like this one had, and even the ones that get me a bit teary. I’ll just say I’m happy when you post and leave it at that. Thanks for the chapter! :) (still happy!)
Terrific, a new post from DnA! I love them talking and getting things straightened out. I love Bette’s patience and the way she’s helping Tina really unselfishly.
The lines of communication have opened up. Now they can move forward and begin a new chapter in their lives.
Im really loving this story thank you so much for posting.
Update, please??
this was really nice, ya know? ;)
Awe that was so good, you leave me with a warm fuzzy feeling about how well they are doing. Wow Bette has given it a lot of thought and I like that she’s come up with answers. Nice writting and thanks for sharing with us
I really love this story. I’m glad they were able to have such a meaningful talk.
Hi D&A, Gal that was awesome. Your showed how good it is to real talk. There was such an air of love and emotional support through this chapter as Bette finally told Tina the complete truth about the events and feelings that lead up their break-up and the fallout.Tina need to hear this to understand their past and realize that they can have a future together.This was a cathartic discussion.I am so happy that they aren’t rushing anything as this is so precious to them that they need the time and space to come together completely.Now I can’t wait to find out more from Tina’s journal as her visible and emotional wounds heal.There will be scars but with the love and encouragement.Then the date…Oh I am so excited at the prospect.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I love all this talking that Bette and Tina are doing….it always felt like there was so much betweeen them and no words to express it….and you are giving it all words very nice
I love the discussions you are letting B & T have. So much love and support shown in this conversation. Thanks for the great update! PPS
Nice to hear they’ll be spending more happy time together ;-)
Fantastic chapter. So glad they had that time together and got a few things worked out. Now they have the date to look forward to and apartment hunting and their future together. It’s awesome. Thsnks
I feel really great now about them two. Great to see it is going smoothly. PPVS
Excellent update. Thank you for this story. Just brilliant.
DnA- I am just catching up– which is SUCH a PLEASURE, clicking on that Next Post by This Author button and finding post after post. I got spoiled. Your writing is very warm and rich and satisfying. I can’t wait to see what you do with the round robin, it’s a bit different so that will be fun for you I expect.
Just caught up with your story… It’s wonderful :) PPS
More, more, more please
Please come back and finish this dory. I love it.
Sorry, let’s try again. Please finish this story. Thx
I support, please continue this story, she and beautiful.