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Phoenix Rising (7)
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Alice walked over to Tina and led her to the couch.
“Well we figured the best way to do this would be if Shane took a cab and went into the place and I would follow in the car and stay back, you know, and watch to make sure no one was following. The only problem with that is we will both be gone with our phones. What do you think?”
“I think it sounds like a good plan. Mike won’t try anything at Charlies, but he might try to follow you guys.”
“Are you sure you’ll be alright here by yourself?”
“It’ll only take about 20 – 25 minutes Al I’ll be fine.”
“Tina, you have to promise that the first sign of anything here you will call 911.”
“Al, I will. I promise.”
“Okay, Shane you make sure you have this number in your phone, I will too, this way we can call Tina if anything comes up. Now we just have to call a cab and we’re all set.
The ladies called the cab, and left. Tina was seated on the couch watching the door. She tried to make herself relax but she couldn’t escape the ‘What ifs’….The time seemed to have stood still until finally the phone rang.
“Hello”
“Tina, its Shane. All went well, that guy Charlie really loves you. Is everything okay there?”
“Yeah, all quiet.”
“Okay, we should be back in about 15 minutes.”
“Great.”
“Love you.”
“Love you too”
Tina took a deep breath and sighed. She stared at the clock by the TV and watched the minutes tick by until finally she heard the key in the door. Tina took one last deep breath until finally she heard Alice bellow.
“Honey, we’re home.”
Tina let her breath out and smiled.
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They spent the next hour helping Tina sort through her things while they chatted about their little adventure.
“Hey guys, I got the makings for tacos tonight for dinner, how does that sound to you guys?”
“It sounds great Al, can I help?”
Alice smiled.
“No Tina I got it, besides I thought you had a phone call to make.”
Tina looked at Alice and feigned a pout.
“Since when are you such a task master, the Alice I knew and loved was a serious slacker.”
“You can thank my time with GI Jane.”
“Cute…so where’s your phone?”
Alice was a bit surprised that Tina was going to make the call, but she played along.
“It’s on the table, help yourself.”
Tina picked up the phone, sighed and looked around.
“Guys…I hope you don’t mind, but I think I’ll go in the bedroom to make the call.”
Shane walked over to Tina and put her arm around her.
“I think that’s a great idea, but if you need us just call for us, okay?”
Alice stood and stared at Tina and smiled.
“Go for it kid. We’ll be right here.”
Tina slowly made her way into the bedroom.
Alice looked at Shane a bit stunned.
“You do know this is killing me, Right?”
“Frankly Al, I can’t believe you let her leave this room, but you did the right thing, and I’m proud of you.”
The friends shared a warm embrace and then stood and stared at the door to the bedroom.
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Oh my God what a place to leave us. I’m suck in and dying to see what T says to B. Thanks for the post great story.
Please D, dont become a cliffhanger queen. You’re gonna kill me. PPS. AWESOME update.
unbelievable write soon……
*Pout* Hey! Where’s my shoutout?! LOL – kidding. Love this – can’t wait to hear the phone conversation!
This story gets more interesting with every post. Please don’t leave us hanging too long with this cliffhanger! am enjoying it immensely. PPS
Great chapter & great friends. Loving it.
Oh my goodness, that was a fantastic chapter. So glad Tina called that horrible guy and just hope he really didn’t follow them in any way. I don’t trust men that hit women and especially if they are policemen. Have known a couple and didn’t like them either. Hope her conversation with Bette goes well and that Bette is nice to her. I believe she will be nice to Tina but they are both so hurt over this. Can hardly wait for the next update. Thanks for posting. PPVVS
How will that call go? Brief and to the point? or… (dare I hope) with Tina willing to make the second move? (the first being Tina even making the call). Great chapter, D&A. thanks :)