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“Darling, I’m not defending Bette, why would I if I want you to myself?” Helena said, “I’m just saying don’t hate yourself and degrade your beauty because Bette cheated on you, because when it comes to physical beauty you are a thousand times more beautiful than that carpenter.”
I regarded Helena a moment and hard sobs started seeping from my soul. She comforted me. She took care of me. She was gentle and delicate but she wasn’t like Bette. She didn’t worship my body, heart, and soul, like Bette did. She nurtured me like a mother, and she cared for me like a friend. But there was no passion. There was no love. She wasn’t Bette.
“You’re leaving me for a woman?” Eric said his eyes filling with tears as he looked at 25 year old Tina, who had become so thin her mother wouldn’t recognize her, and who had done a five grand facial treatment that rid her of all the acne and the terrible scars.
“I’m sorry Eric,” Tina said softly, “I love her.”
“You love her? You barely met her! I presented her to you! How could she do something so low as to rip you right out from under me!” Eric cried.
“I’m sorry Eric, I really am,” Tina sobbed, “you saved my life you really did, but you don’t give me what I need.”
“What? I don’t satisfy you sexually is that it? I’ll do more foreplay, I’ll focus only on you! I’ll do anything for you! Please Tina don’t leave me!” Eric begged.
“I’m sorry,” Tina could do nothing else but apologize.
Eric’s face hardened with anger as he spat, “fine go! See how you do without me Tina Kennard. Look at you: low self esteem, eating disorders, severe emotional trauma. Who’s gonna want that Tina? No one knew who you were before me, and if they would have met you then they wouldn’t have wanted you. You are nothing without me, nothing!”
Okay, so I may not be the smartest fish in the sea. I get Bette back and then what do I do, I leave her for a man. It wasn’t a physical need for him, because he didn’t satisfy me the way Bette did. Not even close!
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No matter what anyone says, you and your sister are beautful just the way you are. It is horrible the way people hurt the people they love. But we can rise above this. Even though it had sad elements the story was beautiful.
Hey TB24. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your mom sounds like so many others sadly. Luckily your sister has you by her side supporting her. Beauty comes from with in. Thanks again Hugs to you and your sister. :)
Wow. That was so amazing beautiful, I was so full of emotion as I was reading this story. I loved the way that you incorporated the shows storyline into how Tina’s issue with her looks affected the choices that she made. Yeah, Mothers can be our best champion or our worst critic. Your creative juices never cease to amaze me.
Correcting myself-Not with her looks-BUT her SELF-ESTEEM.
There’s a lot going on in your story… [if you able to write this way?.. I think what you’re mom tells your sis is kinda to much to bear.] going to read now…I’m on the first part and I’m already flinching.
It never ceases to amaze me the damage mother´s do to their daughters all in the name of “love”. I sincerly hope your sister knows how to fight back and that her life and selfworth will not be too affected.
I just wanted to comment on something Tina’s father said “people cheat for a reason”. Because Tina’s mother is mean and unattractive is grounds for divorce or break up. That’s what you do when you’re not happy in any relationship. People cheat because they’re cowards.
I love your stories BTW keep up the great work. Thank you
Thank you for this thought provoking story. It is a lesson that we need to be more careful in our choice of words. Great story.
thank you, i loved it. hope you sister is okay!
How wonderful was this story. Thank you for it.
Wow.
This touched me. I was always a chubby kid. I had low self-esteem because of it. I grew up hearing the comments from everyone, especially my mother. Choice of words can be either beautiful or brutal and can cut you like a knife. I love myself more now than I did as a child because I had to get to know the beauty within. Thank you for reminding us that beauty comes from within and to watch your choice of words.
My mom committed suicide when I was 9, she was my biggest supporter. Can’t imagine the pain that can be inflicted by those we love
I hope,your sister is o.k.Thank you for this story.
That was amazing and feel bad for Tina and glad she with Bette!
I loved it and u r doing a world of good writing this story. This story will help so many girls out there in the world and if anything alot of them would b lesbians. I know how it feels to hate ur body I am pretty skinny but I still hate my body but there is nothing in the world that would make me do thoses horrible things Tina went through. I guess me wanting to b the more masculen one in a lesbian relationship has to do with it because Im very short so I want to get some muscels like Jennifer Beals/Bette Porter has. But I know that to make it worth while I have to treat my body write. Thank you for the fantastic story.
You are without a doubt an exceptional writer….very brilliant…very creative..the way you incorpate the episodes in this story….Bravo!!!! And tina trust me when i say we can all agree that you was one of the hottest women on the L word, beside your gorgeous wife Bette…both in awe of beauty!