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“That was good,” I whispered dropping my head down again and closing my eyes.
When I opened my eyes, I focused on the missing railing of the balcony and without thinking I said, “we really need to fix that railing before our guests get here.”
“Excuse me? What did you say?” Bette said popping up her head to look at me in disbelief.
“Oops, I mean,” I could help but smile bashfully as Bette started climbing up my body underneath the covers, “that was the most intense orgasm ever.”
After giving Bette a deep kiss enjoying the taste of myself I pushed up so that I could get on top, “and I think you deserve more or less the same.”
Bette smiled as my lips left hers and went down to her neck. I was kissing her mocha skin so softly, slowly going down her chest.
“Just kiss me,” Bette whispered softly.
“I am kissing you,” I whispered back giving her a smile.
“Yeah, but kiss me like this,” Bette said grabbing my face and pulling me down into a kiss that was so passionate I was lost in passion.
I moaned into the kiss as she flipped us over again and leaned on her elbow to look down at me. She looked into my eyes, looking so fucking beautiful illuminated by the dim candlelight, with her dark locks hanging off one side of her head. Our lips met again once she noticed how much I was admiring her beauty at that moment.
“You know what I would like to do when we get to New York?” Bette said softly.
“What?” I said with a smile.
“I would like to marry you.”
My eyebrows raised in surprise and I couldn’t hide the giddy smile on my face, “really?”
“Really,” she responded leaning down and capturing my lips again.
Oh every time her lips touch mine, it ignites something within me. It affects every fiber of my being. But I had to break the kiss. I had to tell her. I had to prove that Eric was wrong all those years ago. Bette would still love me, even with all my emotional and mental crap.
“Bette,” I said softly, “I wanna tell you something I never had the courage to tell you before, but you can’t interrupt me, you have to let me finish.
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No matter what anyone says, you and your sister are beautful just the way you are. It is horrible the way people hurt the people they love. But we can rise above this. Even though it had sad elements the story was beautiful.
Hey TB24. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your mom sounds like so many others sadly. Luckily your sister has you by her side supporting her. Beauty comes from with in. Thanks again Hugs to you and your sister. :)
Wow. That was so amazing beautiful, I was so full of emotion as I was reading this story. I loved the way that you incorporated the shows storyline into how Tina’s issue with her looks affected the choices that she made. Yeah, Mothers can be our best champion or our worst critic. Your creative juices never cease to amaze me.
Correcting myself-Not with her looks-BUT her SELF-ESTEEM.
There’s a lot going on in your story… [if you able to write this way?.. I think what you’re mom tells your sis is kinda to much to bear.] going to read now…I’m on the first part and I’m already flinching.
It never ceases to amaze me the damage mother´s do to their daughters all in the name of “love”. I sincerly hope your sister knows how to fight back and that her life and selfworth will not be too affected.
I just wanted to comment on something Tina’s father said “people cheat for a reason”. Because Tina’s mother is mean and unattractive is grounds for divorce or break up. That’s what you do when you’re not happy in any relationship. People cheat because they’re cowards.
I love your stories BTW keep up the great work. Thank you
Thank you for this thought provoking story. It is a lesson that we need to be more careful in our choice of words. Great story.
thank you, i loved it. hope you sister is okay!
How wonderful was this story. Thank you for it.
Wow.
This touched me. I was always a chubby kid. I had low self-esteem because of it. I grew up hearing the comments from everyone, especially my mother. Choice of words can be either beautiful or brutal and can cut you like a knife. I love myself more now than I did as a child because I had to get to know the beauty within. Thank you for reminding us that beauty comes from within and to watch your choice of words.
My mom committed suicide when I was 9, she was my biggest supporter. Can’t imagine the pain that can be inflicted by those we love
I hope,your sister is o.k.Thank you for this story.
That was amazing and feel bad for Tina and glad she with Bette!
I loved it and u r doing a world of good writing this story. This story will help so many girls out there in the world and if anything alot of them would b lesbians. I know how it feels to hate ur body I am pretty skinny but I still hate my body but there is nothing in the world that would make me do thoses horrible things Tina went through. I guess me wanting to b the more masculen one in a lesbian relationship has to do with it because Im very short so I want to get some muscels like Jennifer Beals/Bette Porter has. But I know that to make it worth while I have to treat my body write. Thank you for the fantastic story.
You are without a doubt an exceptional writer….very brilliant…very creative..the way you incorpate the episodes in this story….Bravo!!!! And tina trust me when i say we can all agree that you was one of the hottest women on the L word, beside your gorgeous wife Bette…both in awe of beauty!