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“I’m not letting you go. Not this time.”
“You’ve got to go.”
“What? No. You can’t do this to me. Not again.”
“Oh can’t I now? What makes you so special?”
“You felt something for me. I know you did.”
“Listen I told you before, you can’t get mixed up with me. You’re glitz and fame will get you hurt and I don’t want that to happen to anyone.”
“It works for you.”
“You think I like my life? You think I can’t wait for some car to pull over? To not know what’s going to happen.”
“Then stop.”
“For someone who doesn’t know the first thing about me you’re not shy in telling me what to do. Don’t you get it? I can’t stop.”
“Why not?”
“I’m not going to even bother to explain.”
Alice climbed out of the bed in search of Dana’s clothes, even though she really didn’t want to throw her out of the apartment she knew that it was the only way she could protect her. As she reached the door there was a hammering at her front door, Alice stood frozen to the spot unsure of what to do. The hammering was continuous and whoever was behind the door was getting impatient as the door handle started to shake as they tried to force their way in. Dana was about to say something when Alice jumped back on the bed, knelt facing the startled brunette and gently put her hand over her mouth.
“Please be quiet. Okay?”
Dana nodded and Alice moved her hand away, she gave Dana a small smile and gently kissed her on the lips.
“I’ve gotta sort this out. Please stay in here and whatever you hear don’t come out.”
“Let me help.”
Alice gave another sad smile and shook her head.
“I know you want to help, but believe me when I say that you would only make it worse.”
Dana was about to protest when she was silenced by another kiss.
“Just stay and be quiet. That’s the only way you can help.”
Dana nodded and sat back against the headboard as Alice quickly pulled on some joggers and a top, she ran out to the hall only to pop her head back in moments later with a grin.
“You might need these.”
She threw Dana her clothes and started to close the door to the bedroom.
“I’ve gotta lock the door. Don’t worry you’ll be safe. Just please be quiet.”
With that she shut and locked her door and left Dana to listen to everything that was going on only a few feet away from where she was sitting with her heart in her mouth.
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To parapharse your story… “Christ felix86, what are you doing to me?” Excellent update! I can almost get past my jealousy of you having seen Leisha in concert. ;-D I was so excited to see that you posted and the chapter did not disappoint. Hotness, a little humor and the impending drama. Good for Dana to track Alice down. Good for Alice to drop her walls for a bit (as it were). I am very worried about whatever is behind the door. Take care of our girls, OK? This really was great. And did I mention the hotness? Thanks so much!! Hope to see another chapter soon.
Wow! Great update, I agree with Goose…i was very freakin excited to see that you had posted. You really balanced everything nicely i thought, but i must say. Whoever is at the door better just be an impatient delivery boy waiting for a signature. Please do take care of our Alice, can not wait to see a possible 3rd chapter! Thank YOU!
What is the hell.she locked Dana in and if something bad happen.how will dana be able to help???
excellent story, I’m really enjoying this. Keep up the good work!
WOW!! What a great chapter. Who is at the door? I hope Alice is gonna be okay. I’m glad my Dana went and found her woman. They are so hot together. Pls post again real soon.
I really love this story. The chemistry between them is sizzling! I hope Alice will lt her walls down for Dana. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Great! Maybe Alice will need to hide out at Dana’s? Hopefully Dana will ask Alice to the fancy dinner.
Great writing felix – you have me hooked on this story, so please post soon – and keep Alice safe
damn. You got me hooked.
WOH hotness hotness- I have a feeling that Dana is gonna get out and try to protect Alice and get into more trouble… yeah that’s just Dane. But who’s at the door? I can’t help but remeber the skinny girl’s saying “somebody isn’t gonna be happy” that Alice didn’t get paid sleeping with Dana. But more drama! I love it love it love it. Gosh, if there were a hooker like A, I guess I would have to try her– yeah, jk, I ain’t that brave
Ohh i so wasnt ready for tht chapter to finish!! Tht was excellent nd i love seeing Al and Dana in these situations reli interesting. Oh that and the fact that its reli HOT lol. Cant wait for ur next post to see who is behind tht door and wats gunna happen :) PPS X
thank you for a wonderful update to a great story, hope you read more from you soon….