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Dana Fairbanks was successful, rich, sexy as hell and bored. As she cruised in her sports car down the street, someone caught her eye. She wasn’t really looking for anything in particular but she had had enough of mindless bimbos who were only with her for her money and fame. Right now she just wanted some fun and spying a sexy looking blonde with wild hair, killer legs and dazzling smile, she couldn’t help but grin.
“What the hell.” She murmured as she checked her looks in the rear-view mirror and pulled over. The blonde swaggered over and lent against the door of the car giving Dana ample opportunity to check out all of the blonde’s assets. Dana rolled down her window and looked at the sultry woman as she licked her lips.
“You want to get in?”
“Depends.”
“On what?”
“Come on, you know the game. How much?”
“Anything you want.”
The blonde laughed at this and opened the car door. Gracefully she slid her body into the car and turned to face Dana. The breath caught in Dana’s throat, yes from a distance she saw that this woman had an amazing body, but she hadn’t expected her to be as beautiful as she was. She had smooth, creamy skin and her lips were like fresh rose buds, even her eyes where the most beautiful she had ever seen, the only thing was that they had a dullness of somebody that had lost something and with the blonde’s current profession Dana guessed that it had been something huge.
“You really shouldn’t say that. Some people around here aren’t as nice or as honest as me.”
“I’m sure. What’s your name?”
The blonde raised her eyebrows, normally she would have given a false name, it gave her some sort of protection and it made her think that it wasn’t really her that did these things with strangers.
“Alice.”
She surprised herself the most when she heard herself give her real name, but there was something about this woman that brought it out of her.
“Nice to meet you. I’m Dana.”
With that Dana put her car in gear and sped off.
The car ride was silent for a while then Dana decided that she wanted to get to know this person a bit more before she brought her into her house, granted she had had lots of one night stands but this was different.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.