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    Story written on April 12, 2008 by felix86.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=69214
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    Dana has been locked in the bedroom for safety, but is Alice in danger?

    Dana was straining to hear. She knew that Alice told her to wait in the room and that she locked the door on her. But there was no way she was going to let something happen to the blonde. Even if she had to break the door down, she would do her best to protect her. There was the mumble of two voices coming through the walls. Two angry voices. One was definitely Alice’s but it was the other voice that made Dana throw on her clothes and listen hard. It was male. All Dana knew was that there was some guy in Alice’s apartment shouting at her. Silence. There was silence. Dana didn’t know whether to be glad or worried. She jumped when she heard the slam of the door and sat down on the bed waiting for Alice to let her out. The door was unlocked but the blonde did not enter the room. Dana cautiously made her way down the hall, what she saw filled her with anger and an overwhelming urge to protect. Alice was sat on the sofa with an ice-pack and a mound of bloody tissues held to her face.

    “What the hell happened?”

    Dana was instantly kneeling in front of Alice with her gentle hands cupping the blonde’s tender face.

    “I didn’t laugh at his joke.”

    Alice tried to smile but was to sore and swollen to make it convincing. Dana took the tissue out of Alice’s hand to inspect the damage. Thankfully her nose wasn’t broken but that didn’t make Dana feel any better.

    “Why didn’t you let me help? I could have called the police.”

    “That wouldn’t work. Believe me I’ve tried. I didn’t want you to get hurt. Anyway your face is too pretty to get smashed up.”

    Dana smiled at Alice’s attempts to lessen the situation.

    “I’m not leaving you here. Come back with me.”

    Alice started to look around the room and made a point of holding Dana at arms length to look her up and down.

    “Alice?”

    “Hmm?”

    “What you doing?”

    “Sorry, I was looking for your shinning armour and your horse. You are trying to be my rescuer aren’t you?”

    “I can’t ride a horse. Tried it once, got thrown off. Will a Mercedes do?”

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    1. felix86, I haven’t had a chance to tell you how happy I am that you present us this wonderful story. I love the plot and drama that goes along with it. The previous 2 chapters were fantastic. At first I felt a little uneasy w/ D cruising the street. As the story developed, It made sense. You did an amazing job showing us their attraction to each other immediately. As much as I love a fairy tale, as in “Pretty woman”, I can’t help but worry about how D would deal with the criticism by the public when they learnt about them together. Also the mysterious pimp, I assume that who he was, would raise hell and cause more trouble for A. I am curious as to how A got into this life. Only time will tell. I sense a lot of drama ahead and really am looking forward to the development of this story. Back to this chapter, I love the “shinning armour and the horse” exchange, very funny. You are doing a wonderful job with their dialogs. Very real. Glad that D was absolutely determined to stick around and protect A. And thank you that A wasn’t hurt too badly. Can’t wait for your next post. Many thanks!

    2. Woo hoo! So excited to see a new chapter on this! Thanks so much for finding the time. Poor Alice! I wish she would let Dana in on whatever is going on. Although I can understand why she isn’t. I am seeing a little bit of hope there at the end with Alice agreeing to go to the party. Can’t wait to see what happens next — whenever you get it posted. Thanks again, felix86! This was a wonderful update!!

    3. wowyou are amazing, gal. :) Alice has to go to that party thing with broken nose and bloody face?! Whoa… thank you very much you bastard whoever hit Alice! I’m so glad to see you though!!! I squeled and did a little dance lol

    4. Put up with your writing? What are you talking about? You’re an amazing writer. And there is no way that any Danish fan could forget about you and this fabulous story. Another fantastic update, felix86! In the end, Dana said all the right things. I’m not worried about what everyone will say about them, because it really looks like Dana only cares about Alice. The one thing I’m worried about is that Al will run away because she’s to scared to tell Dana the truth about her. I guess I’ll just have to wait and see what happens, but if I were Alice, I would never let go of Dana. Thanks for this wonderful story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

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