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pick up 3
The two women laughed, Alice winced at the pain her nose was causing her and Dana started to gently stroke her cheek.
“Please. Come with me. Even if it’s just for tonight. I won’t leave until you do. All I want is for you to be safe.”
“If I do, will you promise not to get involved?”
“I can’t.”
“Dana please. I’ll come with you tonight, I don’t really want to be alone and I don’t want to have to go out on the streets. But you have to promise me that you’ll back off when I say. I’m not going to let you get hurt. I’m used to this. You’re not and I don’t want you in danger.”
Dana was going to argue but the sensible side of her realised that if she did Alice might change her mind and not come with her for the night. So she swallowed her objections and nodded at the blonde. Alice smiled and pulled Dana into a hug.
“I have to say you’re the sexiest knight in shinning armour that I’ve ever seen.”
Dana grinned at this. She took another look at Alice’s nose; it had stopped bleeding and wasn’t looking too bad. Still she could have seriously beaten the guy who thought that he could waltz into Alice’s home and leave the woman like this.
“Come on you, get some stuff together and let’s get out of here.”
Alice got up and went into the bedroom to get some clothes. Dana was just about to follow her when her phone started to ring.
“Hello?”
“Damn you Fairbanks. Where the hell are you?”
“Eric, ever the word-smith. Nice to hear from you too.”
“You’re supposed to be at that photo shoot.”
“What? Oh Christ I am, aren’t I? Shit I don’t know what to tell you. I guess I forgot.”
“Yes, well lucky for you they called an hour ago and cancelled.”
“Why didn’t you call me then?”
“I did. It went straight to answer phone. You must have been busy.”
Dana grinned when she thought of what she had been doing an hour ago.
“Yeah sorry about that. I was a bit tied up.”
“As fascinating as this is Dana this was actually a business call. That dinner tonight, it starts at eight, which means you’ve got to be there at seven. Mingle, press the flesh, that sort of thing. Now, who are you taking?”
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felix86, I haven’t had a chance to tell you how happy I am that you present us this wonderful story. I love the plot and drama that goes along with it. The previous 2 chapters were fantastic. At first I felt a little uneasy w/ D cruising the street. As the story developed, It made sense. You did an amazing job showing us their attraction to each other immediately. As much as I love a fairy tale, as in “Pretty woman”, I can’t help but worry about how D would deal with the criticism by the public when they learnt about them together. Also the mysterious pimp, I assume that who he was, would raise hell and cause more trouble for A. I am curious as to how A got into this life. Only time will tell. I sense a lot of drama ahead and really am looking forward to the development of this story. Back to this chapter, I love the “shinning armour and the horse” exchange, very funny. You are doing a wonderful job with their dialogs. Very real. Glad that D was absolutely determined to stick around and protect A. And thank you that A wasn’t hurt too badly. Can’t wait for your next post. Many thanks!
Woo hoo! So excited to see a new chapter on this! Thanks so much for finding the time. Poor Alice! I wish she would let Dana in on whatever is going on. Although I can understand why she isn’t. I am seeing a little bit of hope there at the end with Alice agreeing to go to the party. Can’t wait to see what happens next — whenever you get it posted. Thanks again, felix86! This was a wonderful update!!
wowyou are amazing, gal. :) Alice has to go to that party thing with broken nose and bloody face?! Whoa… thank you very much you bastard whoever hit Alice! I’m so glad to see you though!!! I squeled and did a little dance lol
Put up with your writing? What are you talking about? You’re an amazing writer. And there is no way that any Danish fan could forget about you and this fabulous story. Another fantastic update, felix86! In the end, Dana said all the right things. I’m not worried about what everyone will say about them, because it really looks like Dana only cares about Alice. The one thing I’m worried about is that Al will run away because she’s to scared to tell Dana the truth about her. I guess I’ll just have to wait and see what happens, but if I were Alice, I would never let go of Dana. Thanks for this wonderful story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hi felix86, the update is great and I can wait for the pick up part 4, I hope that Dana don’t give up on Alice can’t she just buy her from her pimp..