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Tina: No, I called my landlord and told him I wouldn’t be coming back.
Shane: That’s great, so you talked to Bette then?
Tina: No, but…I might, when the time is right.
The party started around 1:00. Around ten little kids showed up with their parents; who Bette and Tina knew from their baby music group. They had set up little games for the kids to play, and then sang happy birthday to Angelica. By 3:00 the kids had left; with Bette and Tina exhausted. Alice and Shane stayed to help clean up; Jane was trying to get Angelica to take her nap.
Alice: Ah! What a day…so many little kids.
Shane: It seemed like they had a good time.
Alice: I know, and they were all so adorable, makes me want to have one of my own.
Bette: You want kids Al?
Alice: Someday, but not for awhile.
Tina: I think you’d make a great mom someday.
Alice: Ha, thanks. So speaking of kids where is your little one?
Bette: Jane’s putting her down for her nap. She had a really great time.
Tina: Yeah, they party was great.
They finished cleaning up; the three of them went outside and sat on the lounge chairs. They all just flopped and stayed silent. After sitting and taking some time to relax, Alice broke the silence.
Alice: So…are you two a couple again yet?
Bette: Alice!
Alice: What? I mean….your talking…getting along…LIVING together…it’s a legit question.
Bette: What; we’re not allowed to be just friends?
Alice gave Bette a ‘look’ and chuckled. Tina sighed.
Tina: I’m going to get some drinks for us.
Bette: I’ll help.
Bette and Tina went inside.
Shane: Al, why don’t you just leave them alone?
Alice: Shane, come on…I mean…it’s obvious that they still like each other. Don’t you agree?
Shane laid on the lounge chair silent, avoiding making eye contact.
Alice: Hey…wait a minute. You know something don’t you?
Shane: Alice…
Alice: What? You can’t tell me?
Shane: Uh huh.
Alice: Come on Shane!
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Yay! Happy dancin’ like I just made a touchdown! Well Done Kayleigh! Hope your headache is gone soon so you can start the next one! Luvin’ it! More please!!!
Your Story is really good i love the time you are taking for those two to work things out!
That is right where they need to start…dating and re-discovering. Thanks for the update and please post soon.
Cool!
as I do my Happy Dance & singing…”I’M SO EXCITED & I JUST CAN’T HIDE IT” …
Friends are so great. Dating is good getting to know each other all over again. sounds good to me. thanks
yah!!!!agree with the TOUCHDOWN…good ole Al brought the subject to the fore!!!!!PPS
yesssss!!! you did it!!! *making Ellen degeneres’s dance… I just watched one of those in a video,LMAO* ANYWAY That was a great chapter… “Let’go home” I loved that last line… Post soon please!!!
ok coffee, Did Alice give you the headache? Love your story
Snoopy ears clapping over my head! Yea! they will work things out.
finally *hurray*
Another great chapter.
Finally they talk about their feeling for each other and they got a date, thanks to Alice. Happy for them and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
That made my Friday night since I am sitting at home reading ff. Glad that they finally talked thanks to Shane.
great chapter
That was just GREAT!!!!!! Thank you PPS
I like this…I was getting a little scared there…wondering if somebody was gonna say SOMETHING. I like it when they take it slow it feels like they have a better chance of working thru things. Keep posting.