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Shane: You’re so nosey Al.
Alice: Shane I—
Bette and Tina returned with drinks, Alice stopped whining at Shane. Bette Tina handed their friends a drink.
Shane: Thanks.
Shane looked down at her watch.
Shane: Shit! I forgot I had a client today. I better go. It was a great party.
Alice: I think I might go now too; I have to come up with a new topic for tomorrow’s show…or they just might fire me for real this time.
Bette and Tina hugged their friend’s goodbye.
Tina: Bye guys; thanks for all your help.
Shane and Alice walked around the front.
Alice: Shane I wish you would just tell me what’s going on.
Shane: Nothing! Al, it’s nothing.
Alice: Uh huh…
Alice got into her car and Shane went next door to get ready for work.
Back by the pool…
Bette: I was thinking of talking a short walk on the beach. Would you like to join me?
Tina: That sounds great, I’ll go ask Jane if she minds hanging out with Angelica.
Tina went inside and asked Jane if she could watch Angelica for a little bit, Jane said it was fine.
Tina walked back outside.
Tina: Lets go.
At the beach…
Bette Tina walked alongside the ocean. They decided to go sit down in the sand and watch the sun go down.
Bette: That Alice is something.
Tina: I know right. What’s wrong with two women who we’re a couple, just being friends?
Bette: Yeah…
Bette and Tina sat in silence, both consumed in their thoughts; thinking back to what Shane had said to them just the other day. Tina was staring at the ocean.
Tina: Do you miss it?
Bette: Do I miss what?
Tina: Us…being together.
Bette’s face felt flushed. She didn’t know how to answer that; but thinking back to what Shane said she decided that she would be honest.
Bette: I do.
Tina looked at Bette.
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Yay! Happy dancin’ like I just made a touchdown! Well Done Kayleigh! Hope your headache is gone soon so you can start the next one! Luvin’ it! More please!!!
Your Story is really good i love the time you are taking for those two to work things out!
That is right where they need to start…dating and re-discovering. Thanks for the update and please post soon.
Cool!
as I do my Happy Dance & singing…”I’M SO EXCITED & I JUST CAN’T HIDE IT” …
Friends are so great. Dating is good getting to know each other all over again. sounds good to me. thanks
yah!!!!agree with the TOUCHDOWN…good ole Al brought the subject to the fore!!!!!PPS
yesssss!!! you did it!!! *making Ellen degeneres’s dance… I just watched one of those in a video,LMAO* ANYWAY That was a great chapter… “Let’go home” I loved that last line… Post soon please!!!
ok coffee, Did Alice give you the headache? Love your story
Snoopy ears clapping over my head! Yea! they will work things out.
finally *hurray*
Another great chapter.
Finally they talk about their feeling for each other and they got a date, thanks to Alice. Happy for them and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!
That made my Friday night since I am sitting at home reading ff. Glad that they finally talked thanks to Shane.
great chapter
That was just GREAT!!!!!! Thank you PPS
I like this…I was getting a little scared there…wondering if somebody was gonna say SOMETHING. I like it when they take it slow it feels like they have a better chance of working thru things. Keep posting.