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Tina: The bottom drawer to the left of the stove would be great.
Kit unloaded the pots and pans into the drawer. She then moved onto the next box; which was unmarked. She opened it and saw a random assortment of things.
Kit: Tina I think this was supposed to go with the upstairs boxes.
Kit rummaged through the box; there were photo’s; Angelica’s baby book; and then she came across a little velvet box. When she opened it there was a beautiful diamond ring inside.
Kit: Oh wow Tina; when did you get this?
Tina stopped what she was doing and saw Kit with the ring she had picked out for Bette a few weeks ago. Tina motioned for Kit to go out on the back porch with her so Bette couldn’t hear them. Once they were both outside Tina shut the door behind them.
Tina: Okay Kit; you can’t tell Bette.
Kit: Tell Bette what?
Tina took the ring from Kit and held it.
Tina: I picked this ring up for Bette a few weeks ago; I want to ask her to marry me.
Kit: Oh my god! When?
Tina: I don’t know. I haven’t found the right time with everything that’s been going on. I want to wait until the right moment; you know?
Kit smiled as she put her hand up to her mouth.
Kit: Oh my…I can’t believe it.
Tina: Promise you mention anything.
Kit: Don’t worry, I promise.
Tina and Kit went back inside and finished unpacking the kitchen. They spent only a few hours unpacking; Bette gave them the grand tour of the new house. Tina showed Angus around the rest of the house while Bette showed Kit the great view form their bedroom.
Kit: Bette; the house is great.
Bette: I know; I can’t believe we live here now.
Kit: I’m really happy for you; you and Tina both deserve this.
Bette: Thanks.
They both took in the beautiful view of the ocean as they sat down in the chairs. Tina and Angus joined them.
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in sadden its done!im glad they found their way back to each other.and im sorry your sick,that sucks! waiting for this sequel to start…lol get better soon.. love this story…
wouldn’t it be a great time for Tina to propose? Great story!!! Thanks for posting it. I loved it.
Bravo! I can’t wait for the sequel and for when Tina proposes. I’m sick too so I know how ya feel!! We can get caught up on the reading though!
I am glad you shared this story with us. I love your writing. I am also happy this isn’t the end of your posts…we are looking forward to the new.
I hope they cleaned the couch before anyone sat on it. xD Thanks for sharing!
Can’t wait for the sequel to begin. Love your writing.
I loved this series and I love it even more than there will be a sequel! You rock!
Thank you for such a lovely story…you definitely have to write the sequel becuz this feels like the beginning, not the end.
This ROCKED! Can’t wait for the sequel!
Awesome, but I hate to see it go. You are making me feel a little better by doing the sequel to the story. You can not just leave us wondering when Tina would ask Bette to be her wife and Bette’s reaction to the ring. Thank you for taking the time to do this story.
The road to home for them is each other thanks
thanks for this wonderful story! i already waiting the sequel! it will be as good as this one! congrats girl
That was wonderful ending and let see the sequel, thanks!
Hey Coffee, Sad to see it finish but happy that the gals can now run along the sand together, hand in hand, hearts united. They have their friends around them, supporting their every choice, a beautiful daughter and a new babay on the horizon. Perfect! Take care and come back soon. A sequel or new story will be much appreciated. Your Loyal Fan.